April 23, 2020
Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with english subtitles, one time with russian and again with english subtitles). It's really interesting video about pulleys and how they work👍
Author of the video really like snatch block. He tell about how this pulleys can help
Snatch block redirecting force in ropes and with ropes we get mechanical advantage
However, this man say about some interesting situations, when snatch block helps
Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with english subtitles, then one time with russian, and againthen one time with english subtitles again).
When you're talking about things in the order they occurred, use connecting words like "then" to indicate that.
It's a really interesting video about pulleys and how they work👍
AThe author of the video really likes snatch blocks.
He tellalks about how thisese pulleys can help [???]
"Tell about" isn't used very often. "Tell about" usually means there is specific, crucial information being conveyed (e.g. "He told me about the party, so I knew it was happening."), while "talk about" means that more general information is being conveyed (e.g. "He talked to me about the party, so I knew it was Disney themed.")
Also, this isn't a complete sentence. Using "help" at the end of the sentence like this requires context: it should be obvious what issue the pulleys are helping to resolve.
Snatch blocks redirecting force in the ropes and with ropes we get a mechanical advantage
I don't really understand what you're trying to say here.
However, this man saytalks about some interesting situations, when snatch block helps [???]
Again, not a complete sentence.
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To be perfectly honest, this is not very good. In the future, make sure to use complete sentences, and only put line breaks between different sentences.
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Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with eEnglish subtitles, one time with rRussian andsubtitles and then again with eEnglish subtitles).
It's not technically wrong, but I probably wouldn't start this sentence with Ok.
It's a really interesting video about pulleys and how they work. 👍
AuthThe creator of the video really likes snatch blocks.
Generally author is only for writing.
He tell aboutshowed how thiso use pulleys can help.
Snatch block redirecting force in ropes and with ropes we get mechanical advantageYou can use ropes and pulleys for leverage and use the forces to redirect the snatch blocks.
I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here, so this correction may not be right.
However, this man saye also talked about some interesting situations, whenre snatch block helpss are useful.
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Good job. I've never heard of snatch blocks, so maybe I'll have to watch the video too.
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Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with english subtitles, one time with russian and again with english subtitles). Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with It's not technically wrong, but I probably wouldn't start this sentence with Ok. Ok, I watched this video 3 times (one time with english subtitles, then one time with russian, and When you're talking about things in the order they occurred, use connecting words like "then" to indicate that. |
It's really interesting video about pulleys and how they work👍 It's a really interesting video about pulleys and how they work. 👍 It's a really interesting video about pulleys and how they work👍 |
Author of the video really like snatch block.
Generally author is only for writing.
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He tell about how this pulleys can help He He t "Tell about" isn't used very often. "Tell about" usually means there is specific, crucial information being conveyed (e.g. "He told me about the party, so I knew it was happening."), while "talk about" means that more general information is being conveyed (e.g. "He talked to me about the party, so I knew it was Disney themed.") Also, this isn't a complete sentence. Using "help" at the end of the sentence like this requires context: it should be obvious what issue the pulleys are helping to resolve. |
Snatch block redirecting force in ropes and with ropes we get mechanical advantage
I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here, so this correction may not be right. Snatch blocks redirect I don't really understand what you're trying to say here. |
However, this man say about some interesting situations, when snatch block helps H However, this man Again, not a complete sentence. |
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