May 19, 2022
Why should you go for your dream?
Because you live for only once in the world. You come to the world, not for living, you come to the world for experience. Dream are your goals. It will be very boring if you only work and work without goals in daily lfie.
There is a very famous quote:”You pay the same cost for big or small goals, why don’t we choose the big one?”
You won’t have passion if your live in your life without dream. At least go for
your dream based on think which you want yourself be better and have psaaion!
Because you live for onlyonly live once in theis world.
I changed "the world" to "this world" as it sounds more natural.
You come to the world, not for living, -- you come to the world for experience.
Nice poetic sentence.
Dreams are your goals.
It willould be very boring if you only worked and worked without any goals in daily lfilife.
There is a very famous quote: ”You pay the same cost for big or small goals, why don’t we choose the big one?”
You won’t have passion if your live in your life without a dream.
your dream based on think whichwhat you think you want for yourself to be better and have psaaassion!
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Nice job on writing on an abstract topic.
Pay attention to plurals if you want to improve something next time!
May 20, 2022
Thank you for editing and encouraging！ I think my writing is not good that can support me to write some specific things， this is my weakness. I will keep writing!
Why should you go for your dream?
"Why should you live your dream" would be better
Because you live for only once in the worldonly live once.
You come into the world, not forto living, you come to the worlde, but for experience.
Dreams are your goals.
It willould be very boring if you only work and work without goals in daily lfife.
There is a very famous quote:”You pay the same cost for big or small goals, why don’t we choose the big one?”
You won’t have passion if your live in your life without dreams.
At least go for
your dream based on think which you want yourself be better and have psaaion!
At least go for your dreams based on what you think you want, to be better and to have passion!
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Well done!
May 20, 2022
Thank you！
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Why should you go for your dream? Why should you go for your dream? "Why should you live your dream" would be better |
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You come to the world, not for living, you come to the world for experience. You come into the world You come to the world Nice poetic sentence. |
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Dream are your goals. Dreams are your goals. Dreams are your goals. |
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It will be very boring if you only work and work without goals in daily lfie. It w It w |
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You won’t have passion if your live in your life without dream. You won’t have passion if your live in your life without dreams. You won’t have passion if you |
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At least go for This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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