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July 13, 2025

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Why people are longer live now than past ?

People want to longer live for past years.For this,they always try various methods.However they sometimes success,they sometimes unsuccess. As a result of this try methods,people are longer live now than past years
There are two main reasons of why people are longer live now are improving and developing health systems and increasing number of riches person.



The first main reason of wyh people are longer live now is that improving and developing health systems. People was try various methods for living longer . As a result of this methods , people improve new and very big health systems. These health systems so benefical for people health and longer live. I think that these systems the most important cause of people are longer live now.However people are so careful while they use these systems because if bad people use health systems for own purposes,these systems very dangerous and harmful for world.



The second main reson of why are longer live now is that increasing comfort and number of riches person.Nowadays,world is improving and growing various areas.For example technology,science,politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting riches. İncreasing number of riches person is causing people think about living longer. People are more comfortable spent their money for living longer.İf they are get richer, they are more spent money.Consequently increasing number of riches person and growing world’s economy is causing people are longer live now.


İn conclusion,people everytime want to longer live.They are very worked for this situation and they are working contiunes(past,now,future).Now, people are longer live than past years.There have two main and importanr reasons;first reason is developing and improving health systems. These systems are supported by people want to idea of living longer. Second reason is increasing number of riches person. This situation is causing people think about living longer. The due to situation, people are so careful about living longer because these reasons can damage people's life.

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Why people arlive longer live now than in the past ?

People want to longer live for past years.ForFor the past years, people started to want to live longer. To achieve this, they always try various methods. However they sometimes success,ed, they sometimes unsuccessdon't.

As a result of this tryese methods, people are live longer live now than pin the last years

There are two main reasons of why people
are longer live now aresucceed in doing it; improvinged and developinged health systems and an increasing number of riches personople.

Avoiding the repetition.

The first main reason of wyhy people arlive longer live now is thatbecause of improvinged and developinged health systems.

Same idea as before, this is repetition.

People was try various methods for living longer .

You mentioned this already. 😁

As a result of thisese methods , people improve new and very big health systems.

These health systems soare beneficial for people's health and longer livability to live more than the average.

I think that these systems are the most important cause of why people arcan live longer live now. However people are so careful whilen they use these systems because if bad people use health systems for their own purposes, these systems can be very dangerous and harmful for the world.

The second main reason of why are longer live nowthis happens is thate increasing comfort and number of riches person.s. Nowadays, the world is improving and is growing in various areas. For example technology, science, politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting richesr.

İThe increasing number of riches personople is causing peopleothers to think about living longer.

People are more comfortable spentding their money for living longer. İf they are get richer, they arespend more spent money. Consequently increasing number of riches person and growing world’s economy is causing people are longer live now.

İIn conclusion, people everytime want to longer live.They are very worked for this situation and they are working contiunes(past,now,future).want to live longer. They worked to accomplish this situation and continue to do so. Now, people arlive longer live thanthan in the past years. There havare two main and importanrt reasons; first reason is developinged and improvinged health systems.

Please be careful when crafting your entry. The text has basically the same two sentences over and over.

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mete

July 14, 2025

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thanks for your feedback

Why people are longer live now than past ?


Why people arlive longer live now than in the past ?

These systems are supported by people want to idea of living longer.


People was try various methods for living longer .


People was try various methods for living longer .

You mentioned this already. 😁

As a result of this methods , people improve new and very big health systems.


As a result of thisese methods , people improve new and very big health systems.

These health systems so benefical for people health and longer live.


These health systems soare beneficial for people's health and longer livability to live more than the average.

I think that these systems the most important cause of people are longer live now.However people are so careful while they use these systems because if bad people use health systems for own purposes,these systems very dangerous and harmful for world.


I think that these systems are the most important cause of why people arcan live longer live now. However people are so careful whilen they use these systems because if bad people use health systems for their own purposes, these systems can be very dangerous and harmful for the world.

The second main reson of why are longer live now is that increasing comfort and number of riches person.Nowadays,world is improving and growing various areas.For example technology,science,politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting riches.


The second main reason of why are longer live nowthis happens is thate increasing comfort and number of riches person.s. Nowadays, the world is improving and is growing in various areas. For example technology, science, politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting richesr.

İncreasing number of riches person is causing people think about living longer.


İThe increasing number of riches personople is causing peopleothers to think about living longer.

Second reason is increasing number of riches person.


People want to longer live for past years.For this,they always try various methods.However they sometimes success,they sometimes unsuccess.


People want to longer live for past years.ForFor the past years, people started to want to live longer. To achieve this, they always try various methods. However they sometimes success,ed, they sometimes unsuccessdon't.

As a result of this try methods,people are longer live now than past years There are two main reasons of why people are longer live now are improving and developing health systems and increasing number of riches person.


As a result of this tryese methods, people are live longer live now than pin the last years

There are two main reasons of why people
are longer live now aresucceed in doing it; improvinged and developinged health systems and an increasing number of riches personople.

Avoiding the repetition.

The first main reason of wyh people are longer live now is that improving and developing health systems.


The first main reason of wyhy people arlive longer live now is thatbecause of improvinged and developinged health systems.

Same idea as before, this is repetition.

People are more comfortable spent their money for living longer.İf they are get richer, they are more spent money.Consequently increasing number of riches person and growing world’s economy is causing people are longer live now.


People are more comfortable spentding their money for living longer. İf they are get richer, they arespend more spent money. Consequently increasing number of riches person and growing world’s economy is causing people are longer live now.

İn conclusion,people everytime want to longer live.They are very worked for this situation and they are working contiunes(past,now,future).Now, people are longer live than past years.There have two main and importanr reasons;first reason is developing and improving health systems.


İIn conclusion, people everytime want to longer live.They are very worked for this situation and they are working contiunes(past,now,future).want to live longer. They worked to accomplish this situation and continue to do so. Now, people arlive longer live thanthan in the past years. There havare two main and importanrt reasons; first reason is developinged and improvinged health systems.

Please be careful when crafting your entry. The text has basically the same two sentences over and over.

This situation is causing people think about living longer.


The due to situation, people are so careful about living longer because these reasons can damage people's life.


The second main reson of why are longer live now is that increasing comfort and number of riches person .Nowadays,world is improving and growing various areas.For example technology,science,politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting riches.


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