May 6, 2025
Why i'm living my countrie ?
Well when I was in high school I studied very herd to get a average that can help me to enter médical school
And thanks good I enter it but in my firsts years I understand that there's limited opportunities for doctors in my countrie and I have to travel to Europe or canada to continue my education and practice more also do same reaserch for few years and go back to help my people here .
But i still think that is so hard to live my parents and stay a way from them
Why i'mam I living in my countrie ?y? (or Why am I leaving my country)
My assumption is that you are questioning why you are living in your country when it's so bad a place and no opportunities.
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Assumption: Why are you leaving your country
Well, when I was in high school, I studied very heard to get athe average marks (or "score") that canould help me to enter méedical school
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And, thanks good I enter it but fully, I was able to enter it. But during my firsts years there, I understanood that there's were limited opportunities for doctors in my countrie andy. That's why, I have to travel to Europe or cCanada to continue my education and practice more also. In addition, It is so I can do saome reasearch for a few years and then go back to my country to help my people there .
I'm not sure what this means, here are my assumptions:
"And thanks good I enter it but in my firsts years"
"thanks good I enter it"
-> Thanks to God, I was able to enter it.
-> Thankfully, I was able to enter it.
-> Thank goodness, I was able to enter it.
* Try to divide your sentences. Don't make it too long. Divide "phrases with the same idea" into one sentence.
But i, I still think that it is so hard to live without my parents and stay a way from them.
* add "without" since you are not with your parents when you stay away from them.
* Always capitalize "I"
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Best of Luck!
Why i'm liam I leaving my countrie y?
This is a question, so I've replaced "I'm" with "am I".
Well, when I was in high school, I studied very heard to get an average that canould help me to enter a méedical school
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And thanks goodness, I entered it, but in my firsts few years I understanrealized that there's limited opportunities for doctors in my countrie and Iy so I would have to travel to Europe or cCanada to continue my education and practice more als. Also, to do saome reasearch for a few years and. Then go back to help my people here .
A "herd" is a large group of animals.
We're talking about the past, so "can" becomes "could" and "have to" becomes "would have to".
"Understand" means that you have knowledge of something, but has nothing to do with HOW you got that knowledge.
Names of both continents AND countries are capitalized.
But iI still think that iit's so hard to live with my parents and, so I stay a way from them.
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The main areas where you are struggling seem to be:
Verb tenses (present, past, conditional, etc)
Subjects ("it", "you", "I", "he", etc. Most English sentences sound strange when you don't use these. Except commands like "Go do your homework!")
Spelling (unfortunately, English spelling is very weird, and even I struggle with it a lot. Do you have an internet browser that can use English spell-checking?)
Punctuation
Sorry if this was a lot to read! But, I hope this helps, and keep up the good work!
Why iI'm lieaving my countrie y?
Well, when I was in high school, I studied very heard to get an average score that canould help me to enter méa medical school.
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And thanks good I enterness, I got into it but, in my firsts years , I understanood that there's are limited opportunities for doctors in my countriey and I have to travel to Europe or cCanada to continue my education and practice more also. Also, I did do saome reasearch for a few years and gowent back to help my people here .
But i, I still think that is st is too hard to live with my parents and stay a way from them.
I don't really understand what you are trying to say here because it seems contradictory. You find it difficult to live with your parents and also stay away from them.
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Well done!
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Why i'm living my countrie ? Why Why This is a question, so I've replaced "I'm" with "am I". Why My assumption is that you are questioning why you are living in your country when it's so bad a place and no opportunities. Or Assumption: Why are you leaving your country |
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But i still think that is so hard to live my parents and stay a way from them But I don't really understand what you are trying to say here because it seems contradictory. You find it difficult to live with your parents and also stay away from them. But But * add "without" since you are not with your parents when you stay away from them. * Always capitalize "I" |
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