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asahan2013

Dec. 3, 2025

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Why I'm learning French

Last year, I began learning French every day, but I was still a beginner.
Without the help of a translation application, I can't express myself.
French is the key to West Africa because our company's main market is there.
Moreover, I learn French because I dream of traveling to Québec.
It's a very beautiful place in Canada.
Finally, there are many countries that have French as their national language, so French is very useful for traveling, and I like traveling.


去年,我开始每天学习法语,但我还是个初学者。
没有翻译软件的帮助,我无法表达自己。
法语是西非的关键,因为我们公司的主要市场在那里。
此外,我学习法语是因为我梦想去魁北克旅行。
那是加拿大一个非常美丽的地方。
最后,有很多国家都把法语作为他们的母语,所以法语对旅游很有用,我喜欢旅游。

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Why I'm learning French

Last year, I began learning French every day, but I was still a beginner.

Without the help of a translation application, I can't express myself.

French is the key to West Africa for me because ourmy company's main market is there.

I think in this instance it would be better to say "my", as you haven't specified who else is included in "our".

Moreover, I am also learning French because I dream of traveling to Québec.

Add "also" as it is your second reason.

"I am learning" works better here. "I learn" sounds more abstract.

It's a very beautiful place in Canada.

Finally, there are many countries that have French as their national language, so French is very useful for traveling, and I like traveling.

Why I'm learning French


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Last year, I began learning French every day, but I was still a beginner.


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Without the help of a translation application, I can't express myself.


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French is the key to West Africa because our company's main market is there.


French is the key to West Africa for me because ourmy company's main market is there.

I think in this instance it would be better to say "my", as you haven't specified who else is included in "our".

Moreover, I learn French because I dream of traveling to Québec.


Moreover, I am also learning French because I dream of traveling to Québec.

Add "also" as it is your second reason. "I am learning" works better here. "I learn" sounds more abstract.

It's a very beautiful place in Canada.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, there are many countries that have French as their national language, so French is very useful for traveling, and I like traveling.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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