Nov. 8, 2021
First of all, I like the place.
I can start my business in China which will be much easier.
This is a “clean” business.
I opened a restaurant before, the business did make profit but hygiene issues is never easy.
I see a market opportunity.
My main target customers will be people who is age 50 or above.
Japan is one of the country has a lot of old folks.
This is not a big business.
My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two year.
I just want to make a business can sustain year by year.
I wish by provide this platform will able to find a talent and let the world know.
Why I picked/am picking Japan to start my business
First of all, I like the placecountry.
I canould start my business in China which willould be much easier.
This is a “clean” business.
I opened a restaurant before, the business did make profit butwas profitable but the hygiene issues iswere never easy to deal with.
I see a market opportunity.
My main target customers will be people who is aged 50 or above.
Japan is one of the country that has a lot of old folks.
This is not a big business.
My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two years.
I just want to makestart a business that can be sustainable year byafter year.
I wish by providehope that by using this platform I will able to find a talent and let the world know.
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