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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 12, 2022

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Why I Learn Three Languages

To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.

At first, I studied English because it is the major language, all of the work.

If I had higher scores of English tests, I could get good job that gave me more salary.

Also, I practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and that's way I could start learning easy.

I liked Hong Kong movies, indeed. So I sang the movie's OST again and again.

Lastly, I used to watch Japanese dramas after getting off school.

Watching Japanese commerces was one of my favorite routines for learning.


In order to learn effectively, I am only studying English now.

However, someday, I will use the three languages fluently.

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Why I Learn Three Languages

To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.

At first, I studied English because it is the major language, all of the working world.

If I had higher scores ofn my English tests, I could get a good job that gave me morea better salary.

Also, II also practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters, and that's way I could start learning easily.

I liked Hong Kong movies, indeedmovies from Hong Kong, too.

SoAnd I sang the movie's OSTs again and again.

Lastly, I used to watch Japanese dramas after getting ofut of school.

Watching Japanese commerceials was one of my favorite routines forways to learning.

In order to learn effectively, I am only studying English now.

However, someday, I will use the three languages fluently.

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잘 했습니다!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 13, 2022

402

고맙습니다!

To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.

Alt: "Simultaneously" instead of "same time" for brevity.

At first, I studied English because it is thea major language, all of the work. used in X settings.

Where X can be the words professional, school, personal... I wasn't sure what you meant by work.

If I had higher scores of English tests, I could get a good job that gave me morewith a higher salary.

Also, I practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and t. That's way I could start learning easily.

So I sang the movie's OST again and again.

I would write original soundtrack (OST) in case your reader does not know what an OST is.

Watching Japanese commerces was one of my favorite routines for learning.

Perhaps you meant commercials?

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Great job! I don't think I would ever be able to learn more than one language at the same time!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 12, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Why I Learn Three Languages

To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.

At first, I studied English because it is thea major language, all of the work.

I wasn't sure what you meant by "all the work" so I took it out.

If I hadcould get higher scores ofn English tests, then I could get a good job that gave me morewith a higher salary.

Also, I practicstudied Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and that's wayso I could start learning it easily.

I liked Hong Kong movies, indeed.

So I sang the movie's OST again and again.

Lastly, I used to watch Japanese dramas after getting off school.

Watching Japanese commerceials was one of my favorite routines for learning.

In order to learn effectivemore efficiently, I am only studying English now.

However, someday, I will use these three languages fluently.

Feedback

You did a really good job writing this. I think it is really hard to learn more than one language at once, so I am focusing on learning Japanese right now and once I get better at it then I will also start studying German again.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 12, 2022

402

Thank you. And I hope you will master those languages as well.

Why I Learn Three Languages


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To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.


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To tell the truth, when I was a college student, I studied three foreign languages at the same time.

Alt: "Simultaneously" instead of "same time" for brevity.

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At first, I studied English because it is the major language, all of the work.


At first, I studied English because it is thea major language, all of the work.

I wasn't sure what you meant by "all the work" so I took it out.

At first, I studied English because it is thea major language, all of the work. used in X settings.

Where X can be the words professional, school, personal... I wasn't sure what you meant by work.

At first, I studied English because it is the major language, all of the working world.

If I had higher scores of English tests, I could get good job that gave me more salary.


If I hadcould get higher scores ofn English tests, then I could get a good job that gave me morewith a higher salary.

If I had higher scores of English tests, I could get a good job that gave me morewith a higher salary.

If I had higher scores ofn my English tests, I could get a good job that gave me morea better salary.

Also, I practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and that's way I could start learning easy.


Also, I practicstudied Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and that's wayso I could start learning it easily.

Also, I practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters and t. That's way I could start learning easily.

Also, II also practiced Chinese because I already knew some Chinese characters, and that's way I could start learning easily.

I liked Hong Kong movies, indeed.


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I liked Hong Kong movies, indeedmovies from Hong Kong, too.

So I sang the movie's OST again and again.


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So I sang the movie's OST again and again.

I would write original soundtrack (OST) in case your reader does not know what an OST is.

SoAnd I sang the movie's OSTs again and again.

Lastly, I used to watch Japanese dramas after getting off school.


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Lastly, I used to watch Japanese dramas after getting ofut of school.

Watching Japanese commerces was one of my favorite routines for learning.


Watching Japanese commerceials was one of my favorite routines for learning.

Watching Japanese commerces was one of my favorite routines for learning.

Perhaps you meant commercials?

Watching Japanese commerceials was one of my favorite routines forways to learning.

In order to learn effectively, I am only studying English now.


In order to learn effectivemore efficiently, I am only studying English now.

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However, someday, I will use the three languages fluently.


However, someday, I will use these three languages fluently.

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