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Aiden

Jan. 2, 2021

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Why I choose Pimsleur.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lesson. I found the a site like EnglishClass101, Rocket Language. I almost make a payment but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is not helpful. It could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true. Nothing remains in my head.

I thought I need something to make me move. And then, I found Pimsleur. Although it has only audio lesson, it have great strength that make learner speak repeatly. I can concentrate on the lesson during the audio played. If watching normal lesson is passive study, Pimsleur is active learning.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works. I just want things to go well.

PS. Thanks for correction. Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.

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Why I choChose Pimsleur.

For titles, capitalize all words except articles and prepositions.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lessons.

Presumably, you didn't plan to take only one lesson.

I found the a sites like EnglishClass101, and Rocket Language.

I almost makde a payment, but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is notwasn't going to be helpful [or - wouldn't be helpful].

I realized [at a moment in the past]
that X wasn't going to be helpful [at a future moment after "I realized"]
or - that X wouldn't be helpful [at a future moment after "I realized"]

ItThey could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true.like I was learning English.

NHowever, that's not true, since nothing would remains in my head.

I thought I needed something to make me movelearn actively.

Although it has only audio lessons, it have great strengths the advantage that it makes learners speak repeatly.

I can concentrate on the lesson duringwhile the audio playeds.

If wWatching normal lessons is passive study,learning, but listening and speaking during Pimsleur lessons is active learning.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it isthis approach really works.

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Aiden

Jan. 2, 2021

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I almost makde a payment, but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is notwasn't going to be helpful [or - wouldn't be helpful].

Thanks for detail explanation! It's easy to understand. Time-related sentences are always difficult.

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chris010409

Jan. 2, 2021

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Welcome.

Why I choose Pimsleur.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lessons.

"a[n] online English lesson" would imply just one lesson, no more.

I have found the a sites like EnglishClass101, and Rocket Language.

I almost make a payment butpaid for such services, but, in the end, I didn't, because I realized that just watching somea few lectures is not especially helpful.

It cshould makotivate me feelto studying English for an hour, howeverbut I find that's not truhe case.

NThe reality is that nothing remains in my head.

I thought I need something to make me moveSeeking motivation, I found Pimsleur.

And then, I found Pimsleur.

It's correct, but it's the continuation of the above sentence.

Although it has only has audio lessons, it have great strength that maks advantage is that it makes the learner speak repeatedly.

In this way, I can concentrate on the lesson duringas the audio playeds.

If watching a normal lesson is considered passive studylearning, Pimsleur is active learning.

"passive study" and "active learning" are inconsistent.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works.

I just want things to go wello make progress with my English.

What you wrote originally is correct, but unnatural (as per the instruction "please correct it naturally").

PS.

Thanks for the corrections.

Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.

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Aiden

Jan. 2, 2021

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I just want things to go wello make progress with my English.

Yes, Thanks! That's exactly what I want.

Why I choose Pimsleur.


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Why I choChose Pimsleur.

For titles, capitalize all words except articles and prepositions.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lesson.


Recently, I have considered taking a online English lessons.

"a[n] online English lesson" would imply just one lesson, no more.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lessons.

Presumably, you didn't plan to take only one lesson.

I found the a site like EnglishClass101, Rocket Language.


I have found the a sites like EnglishClass101, and Rocket Language.

I found the a sites like EnglishClass101, and Rocket Language.

I almost make a payment but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is not helpful.


I almost make a payment butpaid for such services, but, in the end, I didn't, because I realized that just watching somea few lectures is not especially helpful.

I almost makde a payment, but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is notwasn't going to be helpful [or - wouldn't be helpful].

I realized [at a moment in the past] that X wasn't going to be helpful [at a future moment after "I realized"] or - that X wouldn't be helpful [at a future moment after "I realized"]

It could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true.


It cshould makotivate me feelto studying English for an hour, howeverbut I find that's not truhe case.

ItThey could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true.like I was learning English.

Nothing remains in my head.


NThe reality is that nothing remains in my head.

NHowever, that's not true, since nothing would remains in my head.

I thought I need something to make me move.


I thought I need something to make me moveSeeking motivation, I found Pimsleur.

I thought I needed something to make me movelearn actively.

And then, I found Pimsleur.


And then, I found Pimsleur.

It's correct, but it's the continuation of the above sentence.

Although it has only audio lesson, it have great strength that make learner speak repeatly.


Although it has only has audio lessons, it have great strength that maks advantage is that it makes the learner speak repeatedly.

Although it has only audio lessons, it have great strengths the advantage that it makes learners speak repeatly.

I can concentrate on the lesson during the audio played.


In this way, I can concentrate on the lesson duringas the audio playeds.

I can concentrate on the lesson duringwhile the audio playeds.

If watching normal lesson is passive study, Pimsleur is active learning.


If watching a normal lesson is considered passive studylearning, Pimsleur is active learning.

"passive study" and "active learning" are inconsistent.

If wWatching normal lessons is passive study,learning, but listening and speaking during Pimsleur lessons is active learning.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works.


Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it isthis approach really works.

I just want things to go well.


I just want things to go wello make progress with my English.

What you wrote originally is correct, but unnatural (as per the instruction "please correct it naturally").

PS.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for correction.


Thanks for the corrections.

Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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