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Scarlett_Father

March 23, 2025

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Why He Fights for Russia

I watched a video on YouTube that recently, a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTube. The primary reason why he fights for Russia is his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might join the Ukraine army. I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese on the Russian side also have the same excuse.

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Why He Fights for Russia

I watched a video on YouTube that recently, in which a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTuber.

I'm guessing my correction is what you mean, but if I take your originally text literally, it could mean that you watched a video that DESCRIBED how a Chinese mercenary spoke to someone on YouTube, but did not actually SHOW him speaking.

If you would add a Chinese version of your text, it would help me to be sure that I'm correcting your text correctly.

The primary reason (why) he fights for Russia is his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might join the Ukraine army.

"Why" is unnecessary. Many native English speakers say "the reason why" in casual speech but rarely write it.

I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese on the Russian side also have the same excusereason.

"Excuse" would imply that they don't want to fight on the Ukrainian side, and they point to the passport issue as a convenient justification for fighting on the Russian side.

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JoeTofu

March 23, 2025

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I hadn't realized that Chinese mercenaries were fighting in foreign wars. Are they doing it because they like fighting, or because they need a job...?

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Scarlett_Father

March 23, 2025

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Thank you!
I wrote this after watching this video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=syKWPralGKQ). Your Chinese is quite good, I believe you'll be able to read it.

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JoeTofu

March 24, 2025

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Thanks! That’s quite interesting.

BTW, my listening & speaking skills are better than my writing — I understand most of that without reading the subtitles. :-)

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Scarlett_Father

March 24, 2025

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厉害!

Why He Fights for Russia

I watched a video on YouTube that recently, in which a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTuber.

The primary reason why he fights for Russia is because his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might have joined the Ukraine army.

I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese fighting on the Russian side also have the same excusereason.

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Scarlett_Father

March 23, 2025

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Thank you for your corrections!

Why He Fights for Russia


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I watched a video on YouTube that recently, a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTube.


I watched a video on YouTube that recently, in which a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTuber.

I watched a video on YouTube that recently, in which a Chinese mercenary spoke to an influential YouTuber.

I'm guessing my correction is what you mean, but if I take your originally text literally, it could mean that you watched a video that DESCRIBED how a Chinese mercenary spoke to someone on YouTube, but did not actually SHOW him speaking. If you would add a Chinese version of your text, it would help me to be sure that I'm correcting your text correctly.

The primary reason why he fights for Russia is his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might join the Ukraine army.


The primary reason why he fights for Russia is because his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might have joined the Ukraine army.

The primary reason (why) he fights for Russia is his passport prevents him from entering Ukraine, otherwise he might join the Ukraine army.

"Why" is unnecessary. Many native English speakers say "the reason why" in casual speech but rarely write it.

I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese on the Russian side also have the same excuse.


I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese fighting on the Russian side also have the same excusereason.

I am surprised to hear that he thinks many other Chinese on the Russian side also have the same excusereason.

"Excuse" would imply that they don't want to fight on the Ukrainian side, and they point to the passport issue as a convenient justification for fighting on the Russian side.

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