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ohamu

March 4, 2025

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Why don’t you come out when I need

I write this text after work .
Inside my head is full of emotion that I’m tired!! I always feel so after work.
Today I answered phone from costumer of overseas.
I can’t understand what he wanted to tell.
I’m frustrated.
I thought I have to say something ,but my brain was freeze.
The phrases don’t come out when I need them.


仕事終わりにこの文章を書いています。このシチュエーションで頭に浮かぶことは、基本的に「疲れたああ」ばかりです。
今日会社で海外からの電話を受けました。相手はもちろん英語で、ほとんど分かりませんでした。悔しい!
とりあえずなにか言わなきゃと思っても、頭が真っ白になってしまいました。
後から考えれば、あのフレーズが使えるのに、勉強したのに、いざとなると出てこないものです。

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Why don’t youthe phrases come outto me when I need them?

I am writeing this text after work .

Inside mMy head is full of emotion thatand I’m tired!!

I always feel like thiso after work.

Today, I answered a phone call from coa custuomer ofrom overseas.

I caouldn’t understand what he wanted to tell.

I’m was frustrated.

I thought I have to say something ,but my brain was freeozen.

The phrases don’t come out when I need them.

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ohamu

March 5, 2025

1

Thank you!

I wriote this text after work .

Wrote is the paste tense of write.

Inside my head is full of emotion that I’m tired!!

I always feel sothis way after work.

Today I answered the phone from costumer of overseasan overseas customer.

I caouldn’t understand what he wanted to tell me.

Couldn’t is past tense of can’t.

I’m was frustrated.

Since this is about a past situation, the past tense of this sentence feels more natural to express feeling frustrated.

I thought to myself, I have to say something ,b. But my brain was freeozen.

I love your imagery here!

The phrases don’t come out when I need them.

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This is very relatable to my experience of when my mind blanks in conversations! I understood everything you wrote. I just made minor grammatical edits. Thank you for sharing!

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ohamu

March 4, 2025

1

Thank you so much!
I’m glad to know that you have had a similar experience.

Why don’t you come out when I need

I write this text after work .

Inside my headrt is full of emotion thats and I’m tired!!

I always feel like thiso after work.

Today I answered a phone call from a costumer of overseas.

I can’t understand what he wanted to tellsay.

I’m frustrated.

I thought I have to say something , but my brain was freefroze.

The phrases don’t come out when I need them.

ohamu's avatar
ohamu

March 4, 2025

1

Thank you so much!

Why don’t you come out when I need


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Why don’t youthe phrases come outto me when I need them?

I write this text after work .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wriote this text after work .

Wrote is the paste tense of write.

I am writeing this text after work .

Inside my head is full of emotion that I’m tired!!


Inside my headrt is full of emotion thats and I’m tired!!

Inside my head is full of emotion that I’m tired!!

Inside mMy head is full of emotion thatand I’m tired!!

I always feel so after work.


I always feel like thiso after work.

I always feel sothis way after work.

I always feel like thiso after work.

Today I answered phone from costumer of overseas.


Today I answered a phone call from a costumer of overseas.

Today I answered the phone from costumer of overseasan overseas customer.

Today, I answered a phone call from coa custuomer ofrom overseas.

I can’t understand what he wanted to tell.


I can’t understand what he wanted to tellsay.

I caouldn’t understand what he wanted to tell me.

Couldn’t is past tense of can’t.

I caouldn’t understand what he wanted to tell.

I’m frustrated.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m was frustrated.

Since this is about a past situation, the past tense of this sentence feels more natural to express feeling frustrated.

I’m was frustrated.

I thought I have to say something ,but my brain was freeze.


I thought I have to say something , but my brain was freefroze.

I thought to myself, I have to say something ,b. But my brain was freeozen.

I love your imagery here!

I thought I have to say something ,but my brain was freeozen.

The phrases don’t come out when I need them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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