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ponta

Feb. 15, 2021

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Why Do You Learn?

People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is a question; Why do you learn? Some people say because learning is interesting, and others say because it's required to graduate. There is no correct answer to this question. I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with. The theory is in Right and Smile by Dazai Osamu. A character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on as long as you can. You can forget what you learned and not have to be proud of your knowledge. It is important to be cultivated, not to remember things. Being cultivated is having generosity, which means knowing love. Even if you forget everything you learned, you will gain a dash of gold dust through your learning process. This is precious. Therefore, you have to study and be cultivated.

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Why Do You Learn?

People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is awhich raises the question;: Why do you learn?

Some people say because learning is interesting, and others say because it's required tofor graduateion.

There is no correct answer to this question.

I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with.

The theory is in Right and Smile by Dazai Osamu.

AOne character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, for as long as you can.

It is important to be cultivated, not to rememberorize things.

The original sentence makes it sound like remembering things is somehow bad.

Being cultivated is haventails being generousity, which means knowing love.

Even if you forget everything you learned, you will gain a dash of gold dust through your learning process.

This is precious.

Therefore, you have to study and bstudy to become cultivated.

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ponta

Feb. 16, 2021

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Thank you for your correction!

Why Ddo You Lpeople want to learn?

By reading the rest of your sentences, I think what you want to ask is:

Why do people want to learn?

"Why do you learn?" seems to mean "Why do humans learn?", or "How does the human mind learn?" . Something like "Why do you want to learn?", or "Why do people want to learn?", or "What are your reasons for wanting to learn?", which is more personal, may be more like what you are wanting to say.

People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is aat poses the question;: Why do youpeople want to learn?

There is no correct answer to this question.

I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with.

The theory is in "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

You may want to add just a little bit to this, such as:

The theory is proposed in the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

or

The theory comes from the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

You can also put this sentence together with the previous sentence you wrote, so that it looks like this:

I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with that comes from the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

AOne character saysin the book says that you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, as long as you can.

This is precious.

Therefore, you have to study and be cultivated.

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よくやった!正義と微笑はいい本ですか?

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ponta

Feb. 16, 2021

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訂正ありがとうございます!正義と微笑はいい本だと思うので、是非読んでみてください。

Why Do You Learn?

There's nothing wrong with "why do you learn", but "What's the point of learning" sounds more natural to me.
You can also say "Why learn?"

People learn about a lot of subjects in school, and there is athe question; : (Why do you learn? / What's the point of learning?)

Some people say it's because learning is interesting, and others say it's because it's required to graduate.

There is no correct answer to this question.

I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with.

The theory is in Right and Smile by Dazai Osamu.

A character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, as long as you can.

You can forget what you learned and noyou don't have to be proud of your knowledge.

It is important to be cultivated, not to remember things.

Being cultivated is havthe same as being generousity, which means knowing love.

Even if you forget everything you learned, you willould have gained a dash of gold dust through your learning process.

This is precious.

Therefore, you have to study and be cultivated.

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Really interesting post. It sounds like the character is saying that learning should be done for its own sake, which I definitely agree.

I also really enjoyed Dazai Osamu's No Longer Human (人間失格), so I'd better read Right and Smile as well.

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ponta

Feb. 16, 2021

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Thank you so much! I would like to have you read this book.

Why Do You Learn?


Why Do You Learn?

There's nothing wrong with "why do you learn", but "What's the point of learning" sounds more natural to me. You can also say "Why learn?"

Why Ddo You Lpeople want to learn?

By reading the rest of your sentences, I think what you want to ask is: Why do people want to learn? "Why do you learn?" seems to mean "Why do humans learn?", or "How does the human mind learn?" . Something like "Why do you want to learn?", or "Why do people want to learn?", or "What are your reasons for wanting to learn?", which is more personal, may be more like what you are wanting to say.

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People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is a question; Why do you learn?


People learn about a lot of subjects in school, and there is athe question; : (Why do you learn? / What's the point of learning?)

People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is aat poses the question;: Why do youpeople want to learn?

People learn a lot of subjects in school, and there is awhich raises the question;: Why do you learn?

Some people say because learning is interesting, and others say because it's required to graduate.


Some people say it's because learning is interesting, and others say it's because it's required to graduate.

Some people say because learning is interesting, and others say because it's required tofor graduateion.

There is no correct answer to this question.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with.


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The theory is in Right and Smile by Dazai Osamu.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The theory is in "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

You may want to add just a little bit to this, such as: The theory is proposed in the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu. or The theory comes from the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu. You can also put this sentence together with the previous sentence you wrote, so that it looks like this: I'll introduce a theory that I was impressed with that comes from the book "Right and Smile" by Dazai Osamu.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on as long as you can.


A character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, as long as you can.

AOne character saysin the book says that you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, as long as you can.

AOne character says you should learn about plants, animals, physics, chemistry, and so on, for as long as you can.

You can forget what you learned and not have to be proud of your knowledge.


You can forget what you learned and noyou don't have to be proud of your knowledge.

It is important to be cultivated, not to remember things.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is important to be cultivated, not to rememberorize things.

The original sentence makes it sound like remembering things is somehow bad.

Being cultivated is having generosity, which means knowing love.


Being cultivated is havthe same as being generousity, which means knowing love.

Being cultivated is haventails being generousity, which means knowing love.

Even if you forget everything you learned, you will gain a dash of gold dust through your learning process.


Even if you forget everything you learned, you willould have gained a dash of gold dust through your learning process.

Even if you forget everything you learned, you will gain a dash of gold dust through your learning process.

This is precious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, you have to study and be cultivated.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, you have to study and bstudy to become cultivated.

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