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mossphlox

Dec. 11, 2020

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Why Do We Celebrate?

People have a lot of reasons to celebrate and we should accept it. If anyone wants to celebrate their planning for retirement or that some people have become parents and are proud of it, they have celebrate with someone who is enjoy with them. People like to celebrate because they want to share their joy with others. It is quite understandable.

I prefer to celebrate just what is important to me and my loved ones. I like to celebrate birthdays, Christmas, new jobs, passed exams or Easter, but just in a little body because I'm an introvert. I have never liked celebrating New Year's Eve because I have a impression that most people just go to drink instead of remembering the year that has passed. Celebrating is pleasant because it's worth capturing the lovely moments and bragging about your successes.

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Why wWe cCelebrate?

Alternately: "Why Do We Celebrate?"

People have a lot of reasons to celebrate and we should accept it.

If anyone wants to celebrate their planning for retirement or that some peoplethey have become parents and are proud of it, they have the right to celebrate with someone who iswill enjoy it with them.

I'm not quite sure if this what you meant to say in the last part of the sentence. Apologies if I got it wrong.

People like to celebrate because they want to share their joy with others.

It is quite understandable.

I prefer to celebrate just what is important to me and my loved ones.

I like to celebrate birthdays, Christmas, new jobs, passed exams or Easter, but just in a little bodysmall group because I'm an introvert.

'Small body' on its own sounds more like you're referring to a physical small body, generally to refer to a group would say 'small body of people' but it's formal and more often used in professional settings.

I have never liked celebrating New Year's Eve because I have a impression that most people just go to drink instead of remembering the year that has passed.

Celebrating is pleasant because it's worth capturing the lovely moments and bragging about your successes.

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I agree! Celebrations are really important sometimes.

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mossphlox

Dec. 13, 2020

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Thank you very much!

Why we celebrate?


Why wWe cCelebrate?

Alternately: "Why Do We Celebrate?"

People have a lot of reasons to celebrate and we should accept it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If anyone wants to celebrate their planning for retirement or that some people have become parents and are proud of it, they have celebrate with someone who is enjoy with them.


If anyone wants to celebrate their planning for retirement or that some peoplethey have become parents and are proud of it, they have the right to celebrate with someone who iswill enjoy it with them.

I'm not quite sure if this what you meant to say in the last part of the sentence. Apologies if I got it wrong.

People like to celebrate because they want to share their joy with others.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is quite understandable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prefer to celebrate just what is important to me and my loved ones.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like to celebrate birthdays, Christmas, new jobs, passed exams or Easter, but just in a little body because I'm an introvert.


I like to celebrate birthdays, Christmas, new jobs, passed exams or Easter, but just in a little bodysmall group because I'm an introvert.

'Small body' on its own sounds more like you're referring to a physical small body, generally to refer to a group would say 'small body of people' but it's formal and more often used in professional settings.

I have never liked celebrating New Year's Eve because I have a impression that most people just go to drink instead of remembering the year that has passed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Celebrating is pleasant because it's worth capturing the lovely moments and bragging about your successes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why Do We Celebrate?


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