Sept. 27, 2023
Why do I wanna improve my English?
Hi folks :)
This is my first publication there. That's why I wanna explain, first of all, why I want to improve my English.
As you know, English is the most important language nowadays. It's spoken ABSOLUTLY everywhere and employers want us to speak it fluently.
I'm currently doing a master in International Relationships so English is quite important...
Moreover, I really enjoy travelling and English is the most usefull language for this. If one day i want to go in Iceland (yes yes, it's one of my dreams), I could speak with the locals easily.
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See you and thanks for reading and the corrections :)
Salut :)
Ceci est ma première publication ici. C'est pourquoi j'ai envie d'expliquer pourquoi j'ai envie d'améliorer mon anglais.
Comme vous le savez, l'anglais est de nos jours la langue la plus importante. Elle est parlé aboslument partout et les employeurs veulent que nous la parlions couremment.
Je fais actuellement un master en Relations Internationales l'anglais est donc plutôt très important.
De plus, j'aime beaucoup voyager et l'anglais est la langue la plus utile pour cela. Si un jour j'ai envie d'aller en Islande (oui oui c'est un de mes rêves), je pourrai facilement parler avec les locaux.
Bien... Je ne sais pas quoi dire d'autre
A bientôt et merci pour la lecture et les corrections :)
Why do I wannat to improve my English?
Hi folks :) This is my first publication there.
That's why I wannat to explain, first of all, why I want to improve my English.
This just sounds a bit more natural.
As you know, English is the mostvery important language nowadays.
It's spoken ABSOLUTELY everywhere and employers want us to speak it fluently.
I'm currently dotaking amy master's in International Relationships so English is quite important...
I think typically you would take your master's, not do it. You could also be working towards your master's, or working on your master's.
Moreover, I really enjoy travelling and English is the most usefull language for this.
If one day iI want to go into Iceland (yes yes, it's one of my dreams), I could speak with the locals easily.
Well... Don't know what else to say more
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See you and thanks for reading and the corrections :)
Why do I wanna improve my English?
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I assume you mean it’s your first post on LangCorrect.
That's why I wanna explain, first of all, why I want tona improve my English.
It’s odd to mix “wanna” and “want to” in the same sentence.
As you know, English is the most important language nowadays.
It's spoken ABSOLUTLYabsolutely everywhere and employers want us to speak it fluently.
If you emphasize “absolutely,” then “absolutely” seems to modify “spoken”: “it’s spoken absolutely.” But you want it to modify “everywhere.”
I'm currently doing a master’s in International Relationships so English is quite important...
Moreover, I really enjoy travelling and English is the most usefull language for this.
In the US, we usually spell “traveling” with one L, and “useful” usually has one L in both the US and the UK.
If one day iI want to go into Iceland (yes, yes, it's one of my dreams), I could speak with the locals easily.
Well... Don't know what more to say more
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See you and thanks for reading and the corrections :)
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Well done. And welcome to LangCorrect. 🙂
Why do I wanna improve my English?
Hi folks :)
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This is my first publication tost here.
publication: the act of making information or stories available to people in a printed or electronic form; a book, magazine, newspaper, or document in which information or stories are published (source https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/dictionary/english/publication)
the writings that we post and correct on this website are "posts" or "journal entries", etc.
That's why I wanna explain, first of all, why I want to improve my English.
It's spoken ABSOLUTLY everywhereabsolutely EVERYWHERE and employers want us to speak it fluently.
I'm currently doing a master's in International Relationships, so English is quite important...
diploma names use an apostrophe
bachelor's, master's, associate's
the exception is when talking about a specific degree. Master of Science, Master of Arts, etc.
reference https://tinyurl.com/2x2s7jeh
Moreover, I really enjoy travelling, and English is the most usefull languagereally comes in handy for thisat.
"comes in handy" = "is useful"
If one day iI want to go into Iceland one day (yes, yes, it's one of my dreams), I could speak with the locals easily.
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See you, and thanks for reading and for the corrections :)
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