June 27, 2020
To be honest, I didn't go to study abroad until I entered my university. However, my favorite subject was English. I could study English hard, so my English score was always good. I can tell you why I like English: it's because my parents went to study in U.S, and they met there, finally they got married. So I think this is my root of English. When I entered my university, my feeling changed. Some of my friends went to study abroad. It let me know that I actually want to study abroad, however I didn't have courage. So I decided to go to America, and I would like to speak English well and talk to people around the world.
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To be honest, I didn't (go to[get to?] study abroad until I entered my university.
Not sure what you wanted to say but
To get to do something= to be able to/to could do something
So either:
I didn't get to study abroad until... = I wasn't able to do
Or just drop 'go to' to say you only went after university
If you use 'my university' it sounds as if the university is your property.
However, my favorite subject was English.
I could studystudied hard in English hard, so my English score was always good.
You don't need the second English here as it's already mentioned.
I can tell you why I like English: it's because m My parents went to study in the U.S, and they met there, and then finally they got married.
So I think this is my root of why I started to take an interest in English.
When I entered my university, my feeling changed.
It let me know that I actually wanted to study abroad, however I didn't have the courage to do so.
So I decided to go to America, and. I would like to speak English well and talk to people around the world.
WHY DO I GO TO STUDY IN THE U.S
In this very specific situation, “go” should be used with a bare infinitive. “To” refers to purpose and changes the meaning, requiring a change of word order.
https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/threads/163933-go-infinitive-or-ing-form
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However, my favorite subject was English.
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I can tell you why I like English: it's because my parents went to study in U.S, and theythe US, met there, and finally they got married.
So I think this is mythe root of my English.
When I entered my university, my feeling changed.
Some of my friends went to study abroad.
It let me know realized that I actually wanted to study abroad,; however I didn't have courage.
Conjunctions like “however” and “therefore” cannot be used to connect clauses.
SoNonetheless, I decided to go to America, and I would like to speak English well and talk to people from around the world.
WHY DO I GO TO STUDY IN U.S.
To be honest, I didn't gowant to study abroad until I entered my university.
However, my favorite subject was English.
I could studyied English hardintensively, so my English score was always good.
I can tell you why I like English: it's because my parents went to study in U.S., and they met there, and finally they got married.
So, I think this is my root of English.
When I entered my university, my feelings changed.
Some of my friends went to study abroad.
It let me knowAfter they made their decision, I realized that I actually wanted to study abroad, however I didn't have the courage.
sounds better this way
SoNevertheless, I decided to go to America, ands I would like to speak English well and talk to people around the world.
I put "nevertheless" instead of "so", because above you said you wanted to do it, but you were scared, but "nevertheless" you decided to go to America.
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It let me know that I actually want to study abroad, however I didn't have courage.
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So I decided to go to America, and I would like to speak English well and talk to people around the world.
I put "nevertheless" instead of "so", because above you said you wanted to do it, but you were scared, but "nevertheless" you decided to go to America.
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