July 24, 2025
Why did Vakko become rich in Turkiye?
Vakko is very expensive textile store in Turkey. Now let’s learn the Vakko’s story.
The early days of the Republic of Turkiye, wearing a hat was mandatory. There was a businessman, Vitalo Hakko. He saw this opportunity and bought a lot of hat from other country. The people bought these hats but they didn’t know whether those were suitable for them or not. There were lots of man with colored hats in the street.
Vitalo Hakko created new business, this name was Vakko. Today, Vakko is one of the most expensive textile stores in Turkiye
WhyHow did Vakko become rich in Turkiye?
"Why" asks for reason, "how" asks for way/method
Vakko is a very expensive textile store in Turkiyey.
Now let’s learn the Vakko’s story.
TIn the early days of the Republic of Turkiye, wearing a hat was mandatory.
There was a businessman, Vitalo Hakko.
He saw this opportunity and bought a lot of hats from other countryies.
The people bought these hats, but they didn’t know whether thosey were suitable for them or not.
There were lots of maen with colored hats ion the street.
Vitalo Hakko created a new business, thiswhose name was Vakko.
Today, Vakko is one of the most expensive textile stores in Turkiye.
July 25, 2025
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Vakko is a very expensive textile store in Turkey.
Now let’s learn theabout Vakko’s story.
Since Vakko is a specific single chain (instead of picking one thing out of a larger group), you wouldn't use "the" here.
T(In/During) the early days of the Republic of Turkiye, wearing a hat was mandatory.
I think "In" or "During" are both fine here, but you need one of them.
He saw this opportunity and bought a lot of hats from other countryies.
"from another country" or "from other countries" - make sure you match the plural with appropriate words.
The pPeople bought these hats but they didn’t know whether those were suitable for them or not.
In this case you can use "the people" or "people" grammatically - both are ok. But "the people" is used a bit more for more serious matters, like politics or scandals.
Vitalo Hakko created new a business, thits name was Vakko.
The topic here is a business, not a name, so it's wrong to use "this name" since you weren't previously discussing a name.
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Good job! I made a number of style corrections but it's more advanced stuff.
July 25, 2025
Thank you !
Vakko is a very expensive textile store in Turkey.
Now let’s learn the Vakko’s story.
TIn the early days of the Republic of Turkiye, wearing a hat was mandatory.
There was a businessman, named Vitalo Hakko.
He saw thisan opportunity and bought a lot of hats from other countryies.
Either, “…a lot of hats from another country.” Or “…a lot of hats from other countries.”
The pPeople bought these hats, but they didn’t know whether thosey were suitable for them or not.
There were lots of maen with colored hats in the street.
Vitalo Hakko created a new business, this name was called “Vakko.”
Today, Vakko is one of the most expensive textile stores in Turkiye.
I think the name of the country should be spelled, “Turkiye” in the entire
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The spelling of the country should be the same in the entire text. Either “Turkiye” or “Turkey,” not both.
July 25, 2025
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The early days of the Republic of Turkiye, wearing a hat was mandatory.
I think "In" or "During" are both fine here, but you need one of them.
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The people bought these hats but they didn’t know whether those were suitable for them or not.
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