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July 2, 2022

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Why can't a man just stop lying?

I don’t think this question is available unless it is “ why can’t people just stop lying?”. As human beings, I guess you know we all need to lie in our every single day even if we don’t want to do it. We always lie to someone for variable reasons. Sometimes we lie to protect ourselves because we have to accept our powerless. Sometimes we lie to protect others because we don’t want them hurt. Sometimes we lie to stand for our benefit because we have to. There are so many situations. Anyway, we cannot live normally without lying.

Let me give you some examples. First I will let you know why we lie to protect ourselves. Now I am working at a top internet company in China, which is responsible for game product and I have a damn shit leader who always pushes me. He often tells me I should do something good but he never tells me the standard of the works even the ddl also. Moreover, he doesn’t allow me to leave after work time,“ we only can leave after 9.00 pm every day unless you request leave.” This is what he said when I tried to leave at 6.00 pm. I feel damn and full, so I decide to leave without informing him. After that, he asked me where I am. I responded him:” I am going to the hospital and I am sick.” Every time he asked me why I am not at the working site after 6.00 pm, I responded that. Finally, he never ask me that again, This is an example lies can protect us.

The other example is lying can help us to protect others. I am 21, and I am studying the university courses online because of the covid-19 epidemic. So I have time to go to other places not at home to do my internship. I have experienced one and half years for working even though I only have two years university life online. I am keeping do multiple tasks which make money and study hard. I have got two times dean’s list and got into big companies as an intern, but every time I reply to my dad I am fine, good, great even though I am really tired when he asked me how are you today. I really don’t want to let him feel stressed and bad because I know he got a lot of pressure as a father who has two sons and a daughter. He is a great father, and I should be a great son for him. Lying can help me to let him feel good, isn’t it?

The last example is how lying can make others not hurt. I guess most of us are focusing our looking very much in the period of our life even now, and some guys are really ugly ( I am sorry to say this). Every time they ask me whether they are looking good. I would like to say “ you look amazing and nice!!” Never mind, just a simple example!

Anyway, this is my personal experience and I hope it can give you some inspiration. Thank you!

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I don’t think this question is available unless it is “ why can’t people just stop lying?”.

"Available" isn't the proper usage here; maybe you meant 'appropriate'?

As human beings, I guess you know we all need to lie in ourwe all lie every single day, even if we don’t want to do it.

you can remove the "I guess you know" part. It's not incorrect, it just makes the sentence read weirdly.

We always lie to someonpeople for variableous reasons.

Sometimes we lie to protect ourselves because we have to accept our powerlessness.

There are so many situations in which people lie to others.

This isn't a complete sentence; I added a suggested phrase to make it complete

Anyway, wWe cannot live normally without lying.

First, I will let you knowtell you why we lie to protect ourselves.

Now I am currently working at a top internet company in China, which is responsible for game product anding games. I have a damn shitty leader who always pushes me.

He often tells me I should do something good, but he never tells me thehis standard ofor the works, even the ddl also.

don't know what DDL is referring to here, so I didn't edit it.

Moreover, he doesn’t allow me to leave after work time,“ wI've finished work. "We only can leave after 9.00 pmPM every day unless you request leave.” This is what he said when I tried to leave at 6.00 pm.

I feel damn and fullwas upset and angry, so I decided to leave without informing him.

This is talking about an action that happened in the past, so you need to use the past tense form of the verb.

After that, he asked me where I am.

I responded to him: "I am going to the hospital andbecause I am sick.” Every time he asked me why I am not at the working sitoffice after 6.00 pm, I responded with that.

Finally, he never asked me that again,. This is an example of how lies can protect us.

The Another example is how lying can help us to protect others.

I am 21, and I am studying thetaking university courses online because of the covid-19 epidemic.

So I have time to go to other places not at home to do my internship.

I have experienced one and a half years ofor working experience, even though I only have two years of online university life onlinexperience.

I am keeping doing multiple tasks whichto make money, ands well as studying hard.

don't forget to add -ing to present tense verbs

I have got two times dean’s list and gotten on the den's list two times, and have also gotten into big companies as an intern, but e. Every time I reply to my dadmy dad asks "how are you today?" I reply that I am fine, good, great, even though I am really tired when he asked me how are you today.

I really don’t want to letmake him feel stressed and bad because I know he gothas a lot of pressure as a father who hasith two sons and a daughter.

Lying can helplet me to lethelp him feel good, isn’t iright?

The last example is how lying can make others not hurtkeep us from hurting others.

Not incorrect but the phrasing is a little strange.

I guess most of us are focusing our looking very mucha lot on our looks in theis period of our life even now, and sves. Some guys are really ugly ( I am sorry to say this).

Every time they ask me whether they are looking good.,

Combine the next sentence with this one; it's not a complete sentence

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July 3, 2022

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He often tells me I should do something good, but he never tells me thehis standard ofor the works, even the ddl also.

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July 3, 2022

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Thank you for editing and encouraging. 谢谢你的鼓励!!

Why can't a man just stop lying?


I don’t think this question is available unless it is “ why can’t people just stop lying?”.


I don’t think this question is available unless it is “ why can’t people just stop lying?”.

"Available" isn't the proper usage here; maybe you meant 'appropriate'?

As human beings, I guess you know we all need to lie in our every single day even if we don’t want to do it.


As human beings, I guess you know we all need to lie in ourwe all lie every single day, even if we don’t want to do it.

you can remove the "I guess you know" part. It's not incorrect, it just makes the sentence read weirdly.

We always lie to someone for variable reasons.


We always lie to someonpeople for variableous reasons.

Sometimes we lie to protect ourselves because we have to accept our powerless.


Sometimes we lie to protect ourselves because we have to accept our powerlessness.

Sometimes we lie to protect others because we don’t want them hurt.


Sometimes we lie to stand for our benefit because we have to.


There are so many situations.


There are so many situations in which people lie to others.

This isn't a complete sentence; I added a suggested phrase to make it complete

Anyway, we cannot live normally without lying.


Anyway, wWe cannot live normally without lying.

Let me give you some examples.


First I will let you know why we lie to protect ourselves.


First, I will let you knowtell you why we lie to protect ourselves.

Now I am working at a top internet company in China, which is responsible for game product and I have a damn shit leader who always pushes me.


Now I am currently working at a top internet company in China, which is responsible for game product anding games. I have a damn shitty leader who always pushes me.

He often tells me I should do something good but he never tells me the standard of the works even the ddl also.


He often tells me I should do something good, but he never tells me thehis standard ofor the works, even the ddl also.

don't know what DDL is referring to here, so I didn't edit it.

Moreover, he doesn’t allow me to leave after work time,“ we only can leave after 9.00 pm every day unless you request leave.” This is what he said when I tried to leave at 6.00 pm.


Moreover, he doesn’t allow me to leave after work time,“ wI've finished work. "We only can leave after 9.00 pmPM every day unless you request leave.” This is what he said when I tried to leave at 6.00 pm.

I feel damn and full, so I decide to leave without informing him.


I feel damn and fullwas upset and angry, so I decided to leave without informing him.

This is talking about an action that happened in the past, so you need to use the past tense form of the verb.

After that, he asked me where I am.


After that, he asked me where I am.

I responded him:” I am going to the hospital and I am sick.” Every time he asked me why I am not at the working site after 6.00 pm, I responded that.


I responded to him: "I am going to the hospital andbecause I am sick.” Every time he asked me why I am not at the working sitoffice after 6.00 pm, I responded with that.

Finally, he never ask me that again, This is an example lies can protect us.


Finally, he never asked me that again,. This is an example of how lies can protect us.

The other example is lying can help us to protect others.


The Another example is how lying can help us to protect others.

I am 21, and I am studying the university courses online because of the covid-19 epidemic.


I am 21, and I am studying thetaking university courses online because of the covid-19 epidemic.

So I have time to go to other places not at home to do my internship.


So I have time to go to other places not at home to do my internship.

I have experienced one and half years for working even though I only have two years university life online.


I have experienced one and a half years ofor working experience, even though I only have two years of online university life onlinexperience.

I am keeping do multiple tasks which make money and study hard.


I am keeping doing multiple tasks whichto make money, ands well as studying hard.

don't forget to add -ing to present tense verbs

I have got two times dean’s list and got into big companies as an intern, but every time I reply to my dad I am fine, good, great even though I am really tired when he asked me how are you today.


I have got two times dean’s list and gotten on the den's list two times, and have also gotten into big companies as an intern, but e. Every time I reply to my dadmy dad asks "how are you today?" I reply that I am fine, good, great, even though I am really tired when he asked me how are you today.

I really don’t want to let him feel stressed and bad because I know he got a lot of pressure as a father who has two sons and a daughter.


I really don’t want to letmake him feel stressed and bad because I know he gothas a lot of pressure as a father who hasith two sons and a daughter.

He is a great father, and I should be a great son for him.


Lying can help me to let him feel good, isn’t it?


Lying can helplet me to lethelp him feel good, isn’t iright?

The last example is how lying can make others not hurt.


The last example is how lying can make others not hurtkeep us from hurting others.

Not incorrect but the phrasing is a little strange.

I guess most of us are focusing our looking very much in the period of our life even now, and some guys are really ugly ( I am sorry to say this).


I guess most of us are focusing our looking very mucha lot on our looks in theis period of our life even now, and sves. Some guys are really ugly ( I am sorry to say this).

Every time they ask me whether they are looking good.


Every time they ask me whether they are looking good.,

Combine the next sentence with this one; it's not a complete sentence

I would like to say “ you look amazing and nice!!” Never mind, just a simple example!


Anyway, this is my personal experience and I hope it can give you some inspiration.


Thank you!


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