helena's avatar
helena

May 10, 2020

0
Why are you learning English - written by Bees

[ original text ]

Owning to globalisation, pop-culture and internet, English is very common in daily life. Frequent exposition makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language gives a lot of advantages. Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of it without school.

It happened that during all my way through educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool. For most of the time I wasn't paying to much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English. I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that. I know I have a big lack of knowladge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school. (Thank you school and miss you a little bit).

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes). My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many piece of jurnaling, or books, or films are not availbe for non-English speaker. Even though most of materials I'm intrested in was translated, there is usually something missing from the original text. Translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be so close to the sources or prototype as I can.

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friend. I want to understend her and express my own feelings and thoughts better. Moreover, I wish we can meet in person one day. I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionry during conversation, so I have to overcome my laizyness and absent of language talent and keep learning English.

Also I'm aware how much English is useful in outside world and adulthood life. Most of the better paid job required knowladge of English. If I want to study or work abroad, or go for forign trip, English language is must have. (I heard about people who manage to live well without knowing a language of country they are living in, but it requires a level of wisdom, self-confidance and social-skill that's not in my league).


PS I'm not sure If there any reliable research have been done, but anyway I belive that language shapes our thoughts. We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that our thoughts will fit in. English and Polish are cousins, so difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm intresteted in learning Korean! Completely different system, it may be intresting exercise for my brain.


[ text with corrections ]

Thanks to globalisation, pop-culture and the Internet, English is very common in daily life. Frequent exposition (exposuremakes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language provides a lot of advantages. Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of it without school.

It happened that during all my way through educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool. Most of the time, I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English. I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that. I know I have a big lack of knowledge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school. (Thank you school and miss you a little bit).

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes). My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many pieces of journalism, or books, or films are not availalbe to a non-English speaker. Even though most of the materials I'm interested in were translated, there is usually something missing from the original text. Translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be as close to the sources or prototype as possible.

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friend. I want to understend her and express my own feelings and thoughts better. Moreover, I wish we could meet in person one day. I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my lazyness and absence of language talent and keep learning English.

Also I'm aware how much useful English is in the outside world and adulthood life. The majority of better paid jobs require knowledge of English. If I want to study or work abroad, or go on a foreign trip, the English language is a must have. (I've heard about people who managed to live well without knowing the language of the country they are living in, but this requires a level of wisdom, self-confidence and social skills that's not in my league).


PS I'm not sure If any reliable research has been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts. We unconsciously let our language affect our thinking process, the same way we consciously choose words that our thoughts will fit in. English and Polish are cousins, so the difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm interesteted in learning Korean! Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.

Corrections

OwningThanks to globalisation, pop-culture and internet, English is very common in daily life.

Frequent exposition makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language givprovides a lot of advantages.

Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of from it without school.

It happened that during all my way through educational systemDuring my education I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool.

For mthe majority of the time / Most of the time, I wasn't paying to much attention to thise subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

I know I have a big lack of knowlaedge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school.

My first leanguage didisn't make it toit the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many piece of journaling, or books, orand films are not availbe for non-English speaker.

Even though most of materials I'm intrested in washave been translated, there is usually something missing from the original text.

The translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be aso close to the sources or prototype as I canpossible.

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friendpal.

I want to understend her and better express my own feelings and thoughts better.

Moreover, I wish we canould meet in person one day.

I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my laizyness and absentce of language talent and keep learning English.

Also I'm aware how muchuseful English is useful inin the outside world and adulthood life.

Most of the better paid jobs required knowlaedge of English.

If I want to study or work abroad, or go foron foreign trip, Ethe english language is must have.

(I have heard about people who have managed to live well without knowing a language of country they are living in, but it requires a level of wisdom, self-confidance and social-skill that's not in my leagu I don't have).

PS I'm not sure Iif there any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that express our thoughts will fit in.

Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.

Feedback

Pretty good, some small mistakes but everything was understandable.

Why are you learning English - written by Bees

Owning toBecause or globalisation, pop- culture and ithe Internet, English is very common in daily life.

It happened that during all my All of the way through educational system I hadtook English classes, from kindergardten to high school.

For mMost of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that.

(Thank you school and miss you a little bit).

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes).

My first leanguage didisn't make it toone of the TOPop 5 world-wide famous languages, and many piece of journaling, or books, or films are not availbable for non-English speakers.

MoreoverAdditionally, I wish we can meet in person one day.

PS.S. : I'm not sure If thereif any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

Why are you learning English - written by Bees

Frequent expositionure makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language giveit offers a lot of advantages.

Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't takegain a benefits of it without school.

Alternative:
Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't benefit from it without school.

It happened that duringI had English classes all mythe way through the educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool.

For most of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anywaynonetheless for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

"nonetheless" sounds more natural here than "anyway". "in any case" would also fit well here.

I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that.

I know I have a big lack of knowlaedge and huge lack of practisce, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitlesd movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school.

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes).

My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous languages, and many pieces of journaling, orsm, books, or films are not availbable for non-English speakers.

alternative: not available to a non-English speaker

The translation process almost always makcauses at least a little damage and I want to be aso close to the sources or prototype as I can.

Something *causes* damage.

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friend.

I want to understeand her and express my own feelings and thoughts better.

Moreover, I wish we can meet in person one day.

I won't be able to use Google translator nor a dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my lazizyness and absentce of language talent and keep learning English.

Also I'm aware of how muchuseful English is useful inin the outside world and adulthood life.

Alternative:
Also I'm aware of how much use is English in the outside world and adulthood life.

Most of the better paid jobs required knowlaedge of English.

Feedback

Watch out for spelling errors and articles (a, an, the). Overall good job! I hope you can meet your pen pal one day and I agree with your view on language shaping thought. :)

Why are you learning English - written by Bees

Owning to globalisation, pop- culture and the internet, English is very common in daily life.

You mean "owing to" instead of "owning to," but in any case, "owing to" is not colloquial. I would suggest "Thanks to"

Frequent expositionure makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of. Knowing this language giveoffers a lot of advantages.

The two sentences are not related, I would separate them into two different sentences. You mean "exposure" instead of "exposition" and the expression is "offer advantages to."

For most of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that.

(Thank you school and miss you a little bit).

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes).

My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many pieces of journaling, orsm, books, or films are not availbe forable to a non-English speaker.

Even though most of the materials I'm interested in wasere translated, there is usually something missing from the original text.

If I want to study or work abroad, or go foron a foreign trip, the English language is a must have.

(I heard about people who manage to live well without knowing athe language of the country they are living in, but ithis requires a level of wisdom, self-confidaence and social- skills that's not in my league).

PS I'm not sure If there any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that our thoughts will fit in.

English and Polish are cousins, so the difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm interesteted in learning Korean!

Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.

Why are you learning English - written by Bees


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Owning to globalisation, pop-culture and internet, English is very common in daily life.


Owning to globalisation, pop- culture and the internet, English is very common in daily life.

You mean "owing to" instead of "owning to," but in any case, "owing to" is not colloquial. I would suggest "Thanks to"

Owning toBecause or globalisation, pop- culture and ithe Internet, English is very common in daily life.

OwningThanks to globalisation, pop-culture and internet, English is very common in daily life.

Frequent exposition makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language gives a lot of advantages.


Frequent expositionure makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of. Knowing this language giveoffers a lot of advantages.

The two sentences are not related, I would separate them into two different sentences. You mean "exposure" instead of "exposition" and the expression is "offer advantages to."

Frequent expositionure makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language giveit offers a lot of advantages.

Frequent exposition makes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language givprovides a lot of advantages.

Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of it without school.


Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't takegain a benefits of it without school.

Alternative: Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't benefit from it without school.

Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of from it without school.

It happened that during all my way through educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool.


It happened that duringI had English classes all mythe way through the educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool.

It happened that during all my All of the way through educational system I hadtook English classes, from kindergardten to high school.

It happened that during all my way through educational systemDuring my education I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool.

For most of the time I wasn't paying to much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.


For most of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

For most of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anywaynonetheless for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

"nonetheless" sounds more natural here than "anyway". "in any case" would also fit well here.

For mMost of the time I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

For mthe majority of the time / Most of the time, I wasn't paying to much attention to thise subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English.

I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know I have a big lack of knowladge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school.


I know I have a big lack of knowlaedge and huge lack of practisce, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitlesd movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school.

I know I have a big lack of knowlaedge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school.

(Thank you school and miss you a little bit).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many piece of jurnaling, or books, or films are not availbe for non-English speaker.


My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many pieces of journaling, orsm, books, or films are not availbe forable to a non-English speaker.

My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous languages, and many pieces of journaling, orsm, books, or films are not availbable for non-English speakers.

alternative: not available to a non-English speaker

My first leanguage didisn't make it toone of the TOPop 5 world-wide famous languages, and many piece of journaling, or books, or films are not availbable for non-English speakers.

My first leanguage didisn't make it toit the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many piece of journaling, or books, orand films are not availbe for non-English speaker.

Even though most of materials I'm intrested in was translated, there is usually something missing from the original text.


Even though most of the materials I'm interested in wasere translated, there is usually something missing from the original text.

Even though most of materials I'm intrested in washave been translated, there is usually something missing from the original text.

Translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be so close to the sources or prototype as I can.


The translation process almost always makcauses at least a little damage and I want to be aso close to the sources or prototype as I can.

Something *causes* damage.

The translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be aso close to the sources or prototype as I canpossible.

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friendpal.

I want to understend her and express my own feelings and thoughts better.


I want to understeand her and express my own feelings and thoughts better.

I want to understend her and better express my own feelings and thoughts better.

Moreover, I wish we can meet in person one day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

MoreoverAdditionally, I wish we can meet in person one day.

Moreover, I wish we canould meet in person one day.

I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionry during conversation, so I have to overcome my laizyness and absent of language talent and keep learning English.


I won't be able to use Google translator nor a dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my lazizyness and absentce of language talent and keep learning English.

I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my laizyness and absentce of language talent and keep learning English.

Also I'm aware how much English is useful in outside world and adulthood life.


Also I'm aware of how muchuseful English is useful inin the outside world and adulthood life.

Alternative: Also I'm aware of how much use is English in the outside world and adulthood life.

Also I'm aware how muchuseful English is useful inin the outside world and adulthood life.

Most of the better paid job required knowladge of English.


Most of the better paid jobs required knowlaedge of English.

Most of the better paid jobs required knowlaedge of English.

If I want to study or work abroad, or go for forign trip, English language is must have.


If I want to study or work abroad, or go foron a foreign trip, the English language is a must have.

If I want to study or work abroad, or go foron foreign trip, Ethe english language is must have.

(I heard about people who manage to live well without knowing a language of country they are living in, but it requires a level of wisdom, self-confidance and social-skill that's not in my league).


(I heard about people who manage to live well without knowing athe language of the country they are living in, but ithis requires a level of wisdom, self-confidaence and social- skills that's not in my league).

(I have heard about people who have managed to live well without knowing a language of country they are living in, but it requires a level of wisdom, self-confidance and social-skill that's not in my leagu I don't have).

PS I'm not sure If there any reliable research have been done, but anyway I belive that language shapes our thoughts.


PS I'm not sure If there any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

PS.S. : I'm not sure If thereif any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

PS I'm not sure Iif there any reliable research haves been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts.

We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that our thoughts will fit in.


We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that our thoughts will fit in.

We unconsciounsly let our language to affect on our thinking process, the same way we consciounsly choose words that express our thoughts will fit in.

English and Polish are cousins, so difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm intresteted in learning Korean!


English and Polish are cousins, so the difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm interesteted in learning Korean!

Completely different system, it may be intresting exercise for my brain.


Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.

Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.

[ text with corrections ]


Thanks to globalisation, pop-culture and the Internet, English is very common in daily life.


Frequent exposition (exposuremakes it easier to learn and also knowledge of this language provides a lot of advantages. Nonetheless, I probably wouldn't take a benefits of it without school. It happened that during all my way through educational system I had English classes, from kindergarden to highschool. Most of the time, I wasn't paying too much attention to this subject, but anyway for a decade I was sort of forced to learn English. I don't mind, on the contrary, I'm grateful for that. I know I have a big lack of knowledge and huge lack of practise, but still I'm able to read Webtoons, watch English-subtitles movies and read a book about BTS' Universe in English - all of that and more wouldn't be possible without school. (Thank you school and miss you a little bit). English is like a key to a magical place full of information and precious content (or funny memes). My first leanguage didn't make it to the TOP 5 world-wide famous language, and many pieces of journalism, or books, or films are not availalbe to a non-English speaker. Even though most of the materials I'm interested in were translated, there is usually something missing from the original text. Translation process almost always makes at least a little damage and I want to be as close to the sources or prototype as possible. Another very important reason why I'm learning English is my pen-friend. I want to understend her and express my own feelings and thoughts better. Moreover, I wish we could meet in person one day. I won't be able to use Google translator nor dictionary during conversation, so I have to overcome my lazyness and absence of language talent and keep learning English. Also I'm aware how much useful English is in the outside world and adulthood life. The majority of better paid jobs require knowledge of English. If I want to study or work abroad, or go on a foreign trip, the English language is a must have. (I've heard about people who managed to live well without knowing the language of the country they are living in, but this requires a level of wisdom, self-confidence and social skills that's not in my league). PS I'm not sure If any reliable research has been done, but anyway I believe that language shapes our thoughts. We unconsciously let our language affect our thinking process, the same way we consciously choose words that our thoughts will fit in. English and Polish are cousins, so the difference between thinking in Polish and thinking in English isn't that big, but that's why I'm interesteted in learning Korean! Completely different system, it may be an interesting exercise for my brain.


[ original text ]


You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium