Oct. 20, 2025
Who would you like to talk to right now?
I would like to talk to my grandmother right now. She is 94 years old. My both parents had been working when I was child, so my grandmother had been taking care of me for more than 10 years. I want her to live healthy as long as possible.
Who would you like to talk to right now?
I would like to talk to my grandmother right now.
She is 94 years old.
My both parents had beenBoth of my parents were working when I was child, so my grandmother had been takingtook care of me for more than 10 years.
"My both parents" is a little strange, "Both of my parents" is the correct phrasing here. The tense also feels a little unnatural, so I've also changed that.
I want her to live healthyily for as long as possible.
Here "healthy" should be "healthily" since it's being used as an adverb (describing how you'd like her to live). You could alternatively phrase it as "I want her to be healthy for as long as possible."
You could also consider changing "I want" to "I'd like" since this is a slightly softer way of phrasing it
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It sounds like you have a great relationship with your grandmother. I hope she continues to live a long and healthy life!
Oct. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me how to express things in a natural way, which is very helpful for my studies.
How to use particles is very difficult.
I would like to talk to my grandmother right now.
She is 94 years old.
My bothBoth my parents had been workinged when I was child, so my grandmother had been takingtook care of me for more than 10 years.
Past simple tense is more natural for this sentence.
I want her to livbe healthy for as long as possible.
To use "live" you would need the adverb "healthily," which I would just avoid since it feels a bit awkward as a word.
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Great job. Enjoy spending time with your grandmother!
Oct. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me how to express things in a natural way, which is very helpful for my studies.
How to use particles is very difficult.
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My both parents had been working when I was child, so my grandmother had been taking care of me for more than 10 years.
Past simple tense is more natural for this sentence.
"My both parents" is a little strange, "Both of my parents" is the correct phrasing here. The tense also feels a little unnatural, so I've also changed that. |
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I want her to live healthy as long as possible. I want her to To use "live" you would need the adverb "healthily," which I would just avoid since it feels a bit awkward as a word. I want her to live health Here "healthy" should be "healthily" since it's being used as an adverb (describing how you'd like her to live). You could alternatively phrase it as "I want her to be healthy for as long as possible." You could also consider changing "I want" to "I'd like" since this is a slightly softer way of phrasing it |
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