Sept. 25, 2024
Who I want to be?
I want to walk with a straight back. I want not to waste a time for useless thing. I want a quality rest. I want be really smart woman. I want a clear skin and clear mind. I want to love, to be loves and hang out with lovely people. I want to be more confident. I want to be brave, little cheeky and a bit scare of my plan because it is huge. I want not scary watch in eyes people which don’t like me for any reason. I want to talk even I am choking on anxiety. I want to build my health and my future.
Who do I want to be?
I want to walk with a straight back.
There aren't any mistakes here. A more common way to say the same thing: "with my head held high".
I want nodon't want to waste a time foron useless things.
I want a quality rest.
I don't know what you mean here.
Maybe: I want to rest deeply. I want to relax properly. I want time to rest properly.
I want beto be a really smart woman.
I want a clear skin and a clear mind.
or "I want to have clear skin and a clear mind"
I want to love, to be lovesd, and to hang out with lovely people.
or "I want to love, be loved, and hang out with lovely people"
I want to be brave, a little cheeky, and a bit scared of my plan because it is huge.
the end of the sentence is technically correct, but there are other ways to say it: a bit scared by my ambitions because they're so large / a bit intimidated by my own ambitions / a bit scared by my plans for the future because they're so huge.
I want not scary watch into not be scared to look in the eyes of people whicho don’t like me for any reason.
I think this is what you mean?
I don't want to be afraid to meet the gaze of people who dislike me.
I want to talk even when I am choking on anxiety.
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Excellent goals, nicely written. Good job!
Who I want to be?
I want to walk with a straight back.
I want to not to waste a time foron useless things.
I want a quality rest.
I want beto be a really smart woman.
I want a clear skin and clear mind.
I want to love, to be lovesd, and to hang out with lovely people.
I want to be more confident.
I want to be brave, a little cheeky, and a bit scared of my plan because it is so huge.
I want not scary watch in eyes(don't?) want to be scary to people whicho don’t like me for anyno reason.
Not sure what you're trying to say here exactly.
I want to be able to talk even I am choking on anxiety.
I want to build my health and my future.
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Good luck! Rooting for you!
Sept. 26, 2024
Thanks ❣️
Who do I want to be?
I want to walk with a straight back.
I want to not to waste a time foron useless things.
I want a quality rest.
I want beto be a really smart woman.
I want a clear skin and a clear mind.
I want to love, to be lovesd, and to hang out with lovely people.
The second comma is optional.
I want to be brave, anb little cheeky and I am a bit scared of my plan because it is huge.
I want to not scary watch inee fear in people’s eyes people whicho don’t like me for anyno apparent reason.
I want to talk even though I am choking on anxiety.
To use “choking” is very stylistic and gives strong imagery.
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What you are going through sounds very happy. Especially anxiety. I believe in you and hope you can find peace!
Sept. 25, 2024
Let me know if you have anything questions about my corrections.
Sept. 25, 2024
Also sorry in my 8th correction I misspelled “and”. “anb” should be “and”
Also my above reply “anything” should be “any” 😅
Sept. 26, 2024
Thanks 🙏🏻
Can you please explain: you and waz don’t understand thought in 9 sentence. I find it hard to look in eyes of people with which there were awkward moments - how do I say it better?
Sept. 26, 2024
I think you want to say
“I find it hard to look people in the eyes after awkward moments”
Instead of “look in the eyes of people” we say “look people in the eyes”
By the way, it’s very normal to have a hard time looking people in the eyes after awkward moments.
Let me know if that makes sense or if you have any other questions.
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I want to be brave, little cheeky and a bit scare of my plan because it is huge. I want to be brave, anb little cheeky and I am a bit scared of my plan because it is huge. I want to be brave, a little cheeky, and a bit scared of my plan because it is so huge. I want to be brave, a little cheeky, and a bit scared of my plan because it is huge. the end of the sentence is technically correct, but there are other ways to say it: a bit scared by my ambitions because they're so large / a bit intimidated by my own ambitions / a bit scared by my plans for the future because they're so huge. |
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