My name's MOHAMEDohamed Ibrahim. I am a students ,. I am a native speaker of Arabic, i. I want to practice my English , i. I love football ba, especiallary Ac mily the AC Milan team ,m. My favorite player is kKaka he wear a 22. He has the number i22 on his shirt , he have. He's a good timeplayer in that team .

not quite sure what bacillary is

main thing is to remember to break up your sentences.

My name' is MOHAMEDohamed Ibrahim, and I am a students ,. I am a native speaker of Arabic, i wantArabic speaker, and I would like to practice my English , i. I love football ba, especiallary Ac mily the legendary AC Milan team ,m. My favorite player is kKaka he wear a 22 number in his shirt , he have a good time in thatá, who wore the number 22 jersey. He seemed to really enjoy his time with the team .

1. "My name's MOHAMEDIbrahim"

Good effort! You introduced yourself clearly, but we have to use a space between your first and last name. Your first name also doesn't have to be completely capitalized :P Just the first letter of your first name and the first of your last name.

2. "I am a students"

You're using a good structure here with "I am..." "Students" is plural, but you're talking about just yourself. So we will just use the singular form.
“I am a student.”

3. "I am a native speaker of Arabic" This sentence is great! Very clear and grammatically correct.

No changes were needed! I just used a connector word "and" in order to connect the next sentence to improve flow.

4. "i want to practice my English"

Great sentence — it's clear and shows your motivation to learn :D

Don't forget to always capitalize “I.” It should be: “I want to practice my English.”

5. "i love football bacillary Ac millan team"

You’re trying to share a personal interest, which is awesome! There are a few small issues here: Capitalize “I.”

“bacillary” is not the right word (maybe you meant "especially"?). I'm not sure, but that's what I thought :)

“Ac millan” should be “AC Milan” (correct name of the football team). So just a small spelling and capitalization error.

So it should be: “I love football, especially the AC Milan team.”

6. "my favorite player is kaka he wear a 22 number in his shirt"

Nice job sharing details about your favorite player! This needs a little grammar and punctuation help:

Capitalize the "M" in “My" since it's the start of a sentence.

Use a period or a connecting word (like and) between the two sentences. I chose to use a comma and "who wore" since he used to be (in the past tense) a player on the team.

“Kaka” is usually written as Kaká (with an accent). I had to google that myself so I totally get the mistake :D

“He wear” should be “he wore” (past tense).

“a 22 number in his shirt” should be “the number 22 jersey.”

Final version:
“My favorite player is Kaká. He wore the number 22 jersey.”

7. "he have a good time in that team."

I like that you're trying to express his experience with the team! Just don't forget to use the "past tense" since he used to be a player and we are speaking about the time that he had back then. So, use “had” instead of “have” (past tense).

You can also say “with that team” instead of “in.” “He had a good time with that team.” (Or more naturally: “He seemed to have a great time with the team.”)

Oh, I also added the word "legendary" since this is your favorite team and they have made history! I thought that it could be a nice way to add an adjective.

My name's MOHAMEDohamed Ibrahim. I am a students ,. I am a native speaker of Arabic, i. I want to practice my English , i. I love football b. Bacillary Ac millanC Milan is my favorite team ,m. My favorite player is kKaka h. He wear a 22s the number i22 on his shirt , he have. He is a good timeplayer in that team .

My name' is MOHAMED Ibrahim and I am a students ,. I am a native speaker of Arabic, ibut I want to practice my English , i. I love football ba(especiallary Ac mily) the AC Milan team ,my. My favorite player is kKaka he wear a 22 number in his shirt , he, who wears the number 22 shirt. He's haveing a good time ion that team .