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galoarellano1987

July 11, 2024

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Who am I?

Hello, my name is Galo and currently i need to improve my skills in Englisg, especificaly my speaking because my goal is looking for a new job where i could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

I hope to find some friends and they can help me in my learning process.

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Who am I?

Hello, my name is Galo and currently i. Right now, I need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically my speaking because m. My goal is looking for a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

Who am I?

Hello, my name is Galo and currently iI need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically/especially my speaking because my goal is looking for. My goal is to find a new job where iI couldan improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

I hope to find some friends and theywho can help me in my learning process.

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I think you're doing a great job and I commend you for trying to learn a new language. My number one advice would be to practice spelling and watch out for run-on sentences.

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galoarellano1987

July 12, 2024

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ok, thanks. I keep trying

Hello, my name is Galo and currently iI need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically my speaking because my goal is to looking for a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

The pronoun ''I'' is always capitalised in English. Since ''is''( from the verb to be) is already conjugated, it would be better to put look in it's original form(infinitif form) -> to look

I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

I chose to put the word ''that'' since it goes straight to the point and sounds more smooth

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galoarellano1987

July 12, 2024

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ok, thanks. I keep trying

Who am I?

Hello, my name is Galo and. I currently i need to improve my skills in EnglisgEnglish skills, especially (or, e"specificalyly") my speaking because my goal is looking forto find a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge inof English and my professional field.

The sentence is a little long so I would suggest breaking it up a little so it's easier to follow.
The word is either "especially" or "specifically"; both work in this context.

I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

or, "I hope to find some friends that can assist me as I learn English."

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Well done! Nice to meet you, Galo :)

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galoarellano1987

July 12, 2024

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ok, thanks. I keep trying

Who am I?


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Hello, my name is Galo and currently i need to improve my skills in Englisg, especificaly my speaking because my goal is looking for a new job where i could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.


Hello, my name is Galo and. I currently i need to improve my skills in EnglisgEnglish skills, especially (or, e"specificalyly") my speaking because my goal is looking forto find a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge inof English and my professional field.

The sentence is a little long so I would suggest breaking it up a little so it's easier to follow. The word is either "especially" or "specifically"; both work in this context.

Hello, my name is Galo and currently iI need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically my speaking because my goal is to looking for a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

The pronoun ''I'' is always capitalised in English. Since ''is''( from the verb to be) is already conjugated, it would be better to put look in it's original form(infinitif form) -> to look

Hello, my name is Galo and currently iI need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically/especially my speaking because my goal is looking for. My goal is to find a new job where iI couldan improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

Hello, my name is Galo and currently i. Right now, I need to improve my skills in Englisgh, especifically my speaking because m. My goal is looking for a new job where iI could improve my aknowledge in English and my professional field.

I hope to find some friends and they can help me in my learning process.


I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

or, "I hope to find some friends that can assist me as I learn English."

I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

I chose to put the word ''that'' since it goes straight to the point and sounds more smooth

I hope to find some friends and theywho can help me in my learning process.

I hope to find some friends and theythat can help me in my learning process.

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