April 17, 2022
White nights
I live in north part of country. There we have short light day in winter and long in summer. In the middle of June sun almost don't leave the horizon. Some people don't like it, but for me it's favourite time of year. It remind me about careless moments in childhood.
White nNights
I live in the northern part of my country.
There wWe have short light days in winter, and long days in summer.
In the middle of June, the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon.
Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of year.
It reminds me about careless moments in my childhood.
I live in north part ofof the country.
In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon.
It remind me about careless moments in my childhood.
I live in then northern part of my country.
There we have short light dayDays are short in winter and long in summer.
In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't leavedisappear from the horizon.
Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of the year.
It reminds me aboutof carelessfree moments in childhood.
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Careful with the use of articles.
I live in north part of the country.
There we have a short period of daylight day in winter and a long one in summer.
In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon.
"don't" means "do not" whereas "doesn't" means "does not"
This is an easy mistake to make that many native english speakers do as well!
When used in third person like in your sentence, "don't" is used for plural objects and "doesn't" is used for singular objects
For example:
"They don't like fish", because "they" refers to several people, we can use "don't"
"He doesn't like fish", because "he" is only one person, we can use "doesn't"
Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of the year.
In English you almost always need to specify who owns something, including abstract things like opinions otherwise it sounds unnatural
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This is a really good paragraph!
I understood everything you meant and only changed things to make them sound more natural or if the grammar was a little bit off :)
I notice you quite often forget to use articles such as "the", "a" or "an"
In English if there is only one of something then most likely you will need to put an article with it or you sound unnatural
"The" is a definite article so you use it if you are talking about a spesific example of a thing
"A" and "An" are indefinite articles so you use them if you are talking about a random thing
"An" is used before a word starting with a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) and "A" is used before a word starting with any other letter (consonants) "a cat, an orange"
for example:
"Can you bring me the book?" -- you are asking for a spesific book and the person you are speaking to most likely knows which book you mean
"Can you bring me a book?" -- you are asking for any book, you don't mind which you just want a book
April 17, 2022
Thank you!
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I live in north part of country. I live in north part of the country. I live in then northern part of my country. I live in north I live in the northern part of my country. |
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There we have short light day in winter and long in summer. There we have a short period of daylight
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In the middle of June sun almost don't leave the horizon. In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon. "don't" means "do not" whereas "doesn't" means "does not" This is an easy mistake to make that many native english speakers do as well! When used in third person like in your sentence, "don't" is used for plural objects and "doesn't" is used for singular objects For example: "They don't like fish", because "they" refers to several people, we can use "don't" "He doesn't like fish", because "he" is only one person, we can use "doesn't" In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't In the middle of June the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon. In the middle of June, the sun almost doesn't leave the horizon. |
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Some people don't like it, but for me it's favourite time of year. Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of the year. In English you almost always need to specify who owns something, including abstract things like opinions otherwise it sounds unnatural Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of the year. Some people don't like it, but for me it's my favourite time of year. |
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It remind me about careless moments in childhood. It reminds me It remind me about careless moments in my childhood. It reminds me about careless moments in my childhood. |
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