June 9, 2024
White dog
Today I went to the cinema with my other roommate's girlfriend. (For those who read my yesterday's text, you need to know that I have two roommates!) We watched a movie named Chien blanc (White dog). It's about an episode of Romain Gary's life and inspired by one of his books. It takes place in the US and begins with the announcement by JFK of Martin Luther King's assassination. The central story is that of a dog that suddenly appears in Romain Gary's yard. It's a very nice dog. The family decides to adopt it. But a bit later, they find out that it's a “white dog”, which means that it was trained to attack black people. Romain Gary can't resign himself to kill it. He decides to have it “untrained”. Around this story, the movie deals with the fight of black people, the hope for a more tolerant society, the right to take life away from any individual…
The dialogues are in French and English. Mainly in English, I think. But actually there are not a lot of dialogues. The movie is mainly silent! And yet, it says so many things!
I really liked it.
White dog
Today I went to the cinema with my other roommate's girlfriend.
(For those who didn't read my text from yesterday's text, you need to know that I have two roommates!)
Unfortunately, "my today's" etc. is unnatural.
We watched a movie named Chien blanc (White dog).
It's about an episode of Romain Gary's life and was inspired by one of his books.
It takes place in the US and begins with the announcement by JFK of Martin Luther King's assassination.
The central story is that of a dog that suddenly appears in Romain Gary's yard.
It's a very nice dog.
The family decides to adopt it.
But a bit later, they find out that it's a “white dog”, which means that it was trained to attack black people.
Romain Gary can't resign himselfbear to kill it.
He decides to have it “untrained”.
Around this story, the movie deals with the fight of black people, the hope for a more tolerant society, the right to take life away from any individual… The dialogues are in French and English.
Mainly in English, I think.
But actually there are not a lot of dialogues.
this sounds a bit better in the singular: "there isn't a lot of dialogue"
The movie is mainly silent!
And yet, it says so many things!
I really liked it.
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This sounds very interesting.
June 10, 2024
Thank you very much!
White dog
Today I went to the cinema with my other roommate's girlfriend.
(For those who read my post yesterday's text, you need to know that I have two roommates!)
"Post" works better than "text" for the writing on this site.
We watched a movie named Chien bBlanc (White dog).
It's about an episodepart of Romain Gary's life and inspired by one of his books.
"Episode" is usually only used for television.
It takes place in the US and begins with the announcement by JFK of Martin Luther King's assassination.
The central story is that of a dog that suddenly appears in Romain Gary's yard.
It's a very nice dog.
The family decides to adopt it.
But a bit later, they find out that it's a “white dog”, which means that it was trained to attack black people.
Romain Gary can't resign himself to kill it.
He decides to have it “untrained”.
AroundBesides this story, the movie also deals with the fight of black people, the hope for a more tolerant society, the right to take life away from any individual…
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The dialogues are in French and English.
Mainly in English, I think.
But actually there areis not a lot of dialogues.
The movie is mainly silent!
And yet, it says so many things!
I really liked it.
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Nice work!
June 10, 2024
Tanks a lot!
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It's a very nice dog.
The family decides to adopt it.
But a bit later, they find out that it's a “white dog”, which means that it was trained to attack black people.
Romain Gary can't resignbring himself to kill it.
He decides to have it “untrained”.
AThroundghout this story, the movie deals with the fight of black people, the hope for a more tolerant society, the right to take life away from any individual…
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The dialogues are is in French and English.
But actually there areis not a lot of dialogues.
The movie is mainostly silent!
And yet, it says so many things!
I really liked it.
June 10, 2024
Fantastic! Thanks a lot!
(For those who read my yesterday's text, you need to know that I have two roommates!)
or "my text from yesterday"
We watched a movie named Chien blanc (White dog).
It's about an episode of Romain Gary's life and inspired by one of his books.
It takes place in the US and begins with the announcement by JFK of Martin Luther King's assassination.
The central story is that of a dog that suddenly appears in Romain Gary's yard.
It's a very nice dog.
The family decides to adopt it.
But a bit later, they find out that it's a “white dog”, which means that it was trained to attack black people.
Romain Gary can't resignbring himself to kill it.
"resign yourself to something" means to accept passively that something out of your control will happen
"I resigned myself to the fact that he would win the election"
"bring yourself to [do something]" means to force yourself to take some kind of action (even though you don't want to)
He decides to have it “untrained”.
AThroundgh this story, the movie deals with the fight of black people, the hope for a more tolerant society, and the right to take life away from any individual…
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The dialogues are is in French and English.
I think I understood "around" here but it doesn't feel right.
Mainly in English, I think.
But actually there areis not a lot of dialogues.
dialogue is usually uncountable
The movie is mainly silent!
And yet, it says so many things!
I really liked it.
June 10, 2024
Thank you sir!
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