May 12, 2023
Which Sport is The Most Exciting to Watch?
The most exciting sport to watch for me is Table Tennis. I clearly remember when I was in my teenage time, nearly every day before class in the afternoon, I would wait at the gate of the school at 2:00 PM and run for a table for Table Tennis on the playground when the gate is opened. If I could find one, I would practice it for 30 minutes, then go to class at 2:30 PM.
At the same time, I like watching Table Tennis, too. Chinese players always win gold at international competitions. Professional players are agile and skilled, they always do stunning and amazing things in the matches. Therefore, I appreciate watching them play Table Tennis, and make me excited.
Which Sport is Tthe Most Exciting to Watch?
We don't usually capitalize "the" in the middle of a title.
The most exciting sport to watch for me is Ttable Ttennis.
We don't usually capitalize the names of sports.
I clearly remember when I was in mya teenage time,r, how nearly every day before class in the afternoon, I would wait at the gate of the school at 2:00 PM and run for a table for Tto play table Ttennis on the playground when the gate iwas opened.
ラッキー！
If I could find one, I would practice on it for 30 minutes, then go to class at 2:30 PM.
At the same time, I like watching Ttable Ttennis, too.
Chinese players always win gold at international competitions.
Professional players are agile and skilled,: they always do stunning and amazing things during the matches.
そうですよね。
Therefore, I appreciate watching them play Ttable Ttennis, and because it makes me excited.
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私にとって、いろいろなスポーツを観るのが好きですが、今、あまり観ません。いつも日本語を勉強しています。笑
とても上手に書けています！
May 14, 2023
あなたは素晴らしい仕事をしています, ありがとう! :-)
The most exciting sport to watch for me is Ttable Ttennis.
We don't capitalise nouns that aren't names, so table tennis is written lowercase.
I clearly remember when I was in my teenage times, nearly every day before class in the afternoon, I would wait at the gate of the school at 2:00 PM and run for a table for Tto play table Ttennis on the playground when the gate iwas opened.
In English, we wouldn't say "in my teenage time", but "in my teenage years", "in my teens" or "in my adolescence" (this is a bit more formal sounding).
If I could find one, I would practice it for 30 minutes, then go to class at 2:30 PM.
At the same time, I like watching Ttable Ttennis, too.
Chinese players always win gold at international competitions.
Professional players are agile and skilled, they always do stunning and amazing things in the matches.
Therefore, I appreciate watching them play Ttable Ttennis, and it makes me excited.
May 14, 2023
Thank you for your corrections, your feedback will help me to write more clearly in the future.
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Which Sport is The Most Exciting to Watch? Which Sport is We don't usually capitalize "the" in the middle of a title. |
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The most exciting sport to watch for me is Table Tennis. The most exciting sport to watch for me is We don't capitalise nouns that aren't names, so table tennis is written lowercase. The most exciting sport to watch for me is We don't usually capitalize the names of sports. |
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I clearly remember when I was in my teenage time, nearly every day before class in the afternoon, I would wait at the gate of the school at 2:00 PM and run for a table for Table Tennis on the playground when the gate is opened. I clearly remember when I was in my teen In English, we wouldn't say "in my teenage time", but "in my teenage years", "in my teens" or "in my adolescence" (this is a bit more formal sounding). I clearly remember when I was ラッキー！ |
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If I could find one, I would practice it for 30 minutes, then go to class at 2:30 PM. If I could find one, I would practice If I could find one, I would practice on it for 30 minutes, then go to class at 2:30 PM. |
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At the same time, I like watching Table Tennis, too. At the same time, I like watching At the same time, I like watching |
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Chinese players always win gold at international competitions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Professional players are agile and skilled, they always do stunning and amazing things in the matches. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Professional players are agile and skilled そうですよね。 |
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Therefore, I appreciate watching them play Table Tennis, and make me excited. Therefore, I appreciate watching them play Therefore, I appreciate watching them play |
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