July 2, 2022
I agree the first opinion which is smaller university provide students with better education experience.
At first, let we confirm define what is education?
Education is when students go to a college or university, the students can learn about something whatever is textbook or mental. And in this progress, their students is happines and not sad.
When we confirm this define, I have three reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is smaller universities or college are more power to focus students mental. This meaning when student fall into problems, the tutor will more quickly find it. Because there more less student. This situation will more easily to find it. And when student be find this bad mental, this meaning there are more chance to delate this question. The students happiness will be better.
The secondary reason is there are less competition if there are a chance. Let we image a situation, Today there a chance which is a student can to interview president at every university. There are 1000 students go to sign up at the larger university. But there are only 100 students to sign up at the smaller university. For the smaller university, their student have more proportion to get this chance.
The final reason is the students relationship will be better, this reasons comes from my experience. I study in Hong Kong where is a smaller university, and my friends study in US and this is larger university. When we are talk about our life. She always told me, when she make a new friends, their relationship will easier to end up, because the new friends will to make her new friends and forgot her. There are many people can to meet after all. But I not meet their case, our university is pretty smaller. Even thought the guys want to make all of students that sample thing.
Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student. Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience. Which view do you agree with and why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the first opintion, which is that smaller universityies provide students with a better education experience.
At fFirst, let we's confirm define: what is the definition of education?
"At first" is not usually used when listing things; it's usually used to describe a change of state. "We" should be changed to "us". Unlike with 我们, which doesn't change, pronouns in English change depending on context. Better phrasing of the last part might be something like "what is the definition of education".
Education is when students go to a college or university, t. The students can learn about something whatever is textbook or mentalmany subjects.
Removed the "whether textbooks or mental"; it wasn't clear what you were trying to say.
And iIn this progress, their students isare happines and not sady.
"Happiness" describes the emotion, you would say "are happy" or "are (feeling) happy". Not sad is already implied (you said they are 'feeling happy'), so I removed that part.
When we confirmGoing with this defineition, I have three reasons to support my opinion.
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Not sure if you meant "mental health" here.
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"falls onto hard times" is a better way to phrase this, but I'd just say "has problems".
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With English we would say "there are less/fewer students". It's a big shift from Chinese, but English also has plurals (in this case; students), since you're talking about more than one.
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'go to sign up' isn't technically wrong, it just sounds a bit strange. I think it implies a feeling of the students actually traveling to the school to sign up.
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Nice! Just make sure to add 'that' instead of 'to'.
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The final reason is that the students' relationships will be better, t. This reasons comes from my experience.
Relationship is pluralized because it's talking about multiple students, and the ' is added on the end of the word 'students' to indicate possession; the relationships are what the students have.
I study in Hong Kong where isat a smaller university, and my friends study in US and this ist a larger university.
When we are talking about our life.,
Either change it to "when we talk about" or add -ing to "talk" if you're going to keep "are". This is because "are" is the present tense form of the verb. Also, there should not be a period here, as this is not a complete sentence. Instead, you could use a comma. Good use of we vs. are here though!
She always told me,My friend always tells me that when she make as new friends, it's easier for their relationship will easier to end up, because ther new friends will to make other new friends and forgoet about her.
"She" here is too vague. You should say "my friend" to re-introduce the subject.
There are many people can to meet, after all.
But I not meet theirin my case, ouras my university is prettymuch smaller.
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Nice job! As someone who speaks English as my first language and is learning Chinese, I understand it's very difficult. Your English is pretty good, keep practicing!
您的英语太棒了!英语发音和语法非常难。加油!
which scale university or college is better |
I agree the first opinion which is smaller university provide students with better education experience. I agree with the first op |
At first, let we confirm define what is education?
"At first" is not usually used when listing things; it's usually used to describe a change of state. "We" should be changed to "us". Unlike with 我们, which doesn't change, pronouns in English change depending on context. Better phrasing of the last part might be something like "what is the definition of education". |
Education is when students go to a college or university, the students can learn about something whatever is textbook or mental. Education is when students go to a college or university Removed the "whether textbooks or mental"; it wasn't clear what you were trying to say. |
And in this progress, their students is happines and not sad.
"Happiness" describes the emotion, you would say "are happy" or "are (feeling) happy". Not sad is already implied (you said they are 'feeling happy'), so I removed that part. |
When we confirm this define, I have three reasons to support my opinion.
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The first reason is smaller universities or college are more power to focus students mental. The first reason is that smaller universities or college Not sure if you meant "mental health" here. |
This meaning when student fall into problems, the tutor will more quickly find it. This mean "falls onto hard times" is a better way to phrase this, but I'd just say "has problems". |
Because there more less student. Because there With English we would say "there are less/fewer students". It's a big shift from Chinese, but English also has plurals (in this case; students), since you're talking about more than one. |
This situation will more easily to find it. |
And when student be find this bad mental, this meaning there are more chance to delate this question. And when student |
The students happiness will be better. The students |
The secondary reason is there are less competition if there are a chance. The second |
Let we image a situation, Today there a chance which is a student can to interview president at every university. Let we image a situation "Let us" or "let's" (a contraction of 'let us'; sort of like how people say 啥 instead of 什么 sometimes.) is the proper usage. It's also a complete sentence, so make sure to add a period. |
There are 1000 students go to sign up at the larger university. There are 1000 students 'go to sign up' isn't technically wrong, it just sounds a bit strange. I think it implies a feeling of the students actually traveling to the school to sign up. |
But there are only 100 students to sign up at the smaller university. But there are only 100 students t Nice! Just make sure to add 'that' instead of 'to'. |
For the smaller university, their student have more proportion to get this chance. For the smaller university, |
The final reason is the students relationship will be better, this reasons comes from my experience. The final reason is that the students' relationships will be better Relationship is pluralized because it's talking about multiple students, and the ' is added on the end of the word 'students' to indicate possession; the relationships are what the students have. |
I study in Hong Kong where is a smaller university, and my friends study in US and this is larger university. I study in Hong Kong |
When we are talk about our life. When we are talking about our life Either change it to "when we talk about" or add -ing to "talk" if you're going to keep "are". This is because "are" is the present tense form of the verb. Also, there should not be a period here, as this is not a complete sentence. Instead, you could use a comma. Good use of we vs. are here though! |
She always told me, when she make a new friends, their relationship will easier to end up, because the new friends will to make her new friends and forgot her.
"She" here is too vague. You should say "my friend" to re-introduce the subject. |
There are many people can to meet after all. There are many people |
But I not meet their case, our university is pretty smaller. But |
Even thought the guys want to make all of students that sample thing. |
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