Aug. 27, 2025
Which photo you most hated and why?
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I read the text of brian926 and I had two imprtants memories of past. How the text as long I will devided in two.
As frist, answer the question of the text, one photographic it i always hated was taken on preschool, where all childrens dressed as angel. Was a beautiful pictures but, how my hair was big I looks like a girl. The people make fun of me when seeing this pictures so I burned it. My mom was sad but is water under the bridge.
Qual foto sua você mais odeia e por quê?
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Estava lendo o texto do brian926 e tive duas memórias impactantes do passado. Como ficou longo vou dividir em dois textos.
Primeiramente, respondendo a pergunta, uma foto que sempre odiei foi uma tirada na escolinha, onde todos os alunos tiveram que por uma roupa de anjo e tirar fotos. Era uma foto bonita mas meu cabelo estava grande então ficou parecendo que eu era uma menina. As pessoas me zuavam quando viam a foto então na adolescência eu queimei ela. Minha mãe ficou triste, mas é aguas passada.
Which photo do you most hatedhate the most and why?
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I read the text of brian926 and I had two importants memories of the past.
How tThe text ais long so I will deivided it into two.
As frist,First, to answer the question of the text, one photographic it i always hated was taken oin preschool, where all the childrens were dressed as angels.
WIt was a beautiful pictures, but, how because my hair was big I looksed like a girl.
The pPeople makde fun of me when seeingthey saw this pictures so I burned it.
My mom was sad but it's water under the bridge.
Feedback
Very good! You're writing is good, just a few mistakes but completely understandable!
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I read the texpost of brian926 and I had two importants memories of the past.
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HowBecause the texpost was long, I will deivided it into two.
As frist,To answer the first question of the texpost, one photographic it i I always hated was taken onat preschool, where all the childrens were dressed as angels.
WIt was a beautiful pictures but, how my hair was biglong and I looksed like a girl.
The pPeople makde fun of me when seeingthey saw this pictures, so I burned it.
My mom was sad, but it is water under the bridge.
Feedback
Mostly just spelling and some structure to the sentences. Work on when to use present and past tense and I think that'll help a lot!
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Response of https://langcorrect.com/journals/qual-foto-sua-voc%C3%AA-mais-odeia-e-por-qu%C3%AA/ I read the text of brian926 and I had two imprtants memories of past. Response to post makes more sense in the context of your overall message Response of https://langcorrect.com/journals/qual-foto-sua-voc%C3%AA-mais-odeia-e-por-qu%C3%AA/ |
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How the text as long I will devided in two.
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As frist, answer the question of the text, one photographic it i always hated was taken on preschool, where all childrens dressed as angel.
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My mom was sad but is water under the bridge. My mom was sad, but it is water under the bridge. My mom was sad but it's water under the bridge. |
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Was a beautiful pictures but, how my hair was big I looks like a girl.
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The people make fun of me when seeing this pictures so I burned it.
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