Sept. 23, 2021
Which one do you agree?
The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extend do you agree?
In some countries, people need an expensive insurance in order to access the national health system, whereas other countries a cheap or no insurance is needed to have medicine or a treatment. I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of the prevention of health problems.
To begin with, I know the prevention of any health problem is so important for every people, yet having access to medicine or treatment is the most important aspect caring our health. People always get sick and need pills, vaccines, treatments in order to get better. For instance, a simple fever or a stomachache, people need to get those pills for health. Recently, I got vaccine for COVID19 and the nurse recommended me taking two pills per day to reduce the secondary effects from the vaccine. So, if I had not gotten those pills, I would have been sick during those days.
Secondly, all elderly people need medicine and treatment because of age. We already know in this age, people have health problems and they frequently need to see doctor and make medical check-ups constantly. In this point, the treatment and medicine are essential to elderly people. For example, until now my grandmother usually goes to the hospital to continue her treatment. She has a bones health problem, so her treatment consists to take medicine and make a medical check-up monthly.
Finally, I believe that the government should be in charge of supplying of medicine as a right, not a business. I support my position due to health is one of the most important things in our life. As an example, people need to have a good health, because if they do not, they are not able to work, study, basically to live. So, the government providing medicine can help to citizens to access it.
To sum up, for these three reasons, I think that having medicine or treatment is more important than only a prevention of illness.
The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine.
Government funding should reflect this.
To what extend do you agree?
In some countries, people need an expensive insurance in order to access the national health system, whereas in other countries a, cheap or no insurance is needed to have medicine or a treatment.
I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of theattempting to prevention of health problems.
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I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of focusing on attempting to prevent health problems.
To begin with, I know the prevention of any health problem is so important for every peoplone, yet having access to medicine or treatment is the most important aspect caringof our healthcare system.
People always get sick and need pills, vaccines, treatments in order to get better.
For instance, a simple fever or a stomachache, people need to get those pills for health.
Recently, I got vaccine for COVID19 and the nurse recommended me taking two pills per day to reduce the secondary effects from the vaccine.
So, if I had not gotten those pills, I would have been sick during those days.
Secondly, all elderly people need medicine and treatment because of age.
We already know that in this age, people have health problems and they frequently need to see doctor and make medical check-ups constantly.
In this pointregard, the treatment and the medicines are essential to elderly people.
For example, until nowto this day my grandmother usually goes to the hospital to continue her treatment.
"until now" gives the impression it is something that stopped happening, which I don't think is what you meant to say there
She has a bones related health problem, so her treatment consists tof takeing medicine and makeing a medical check-up monthly.
I support my position due to health isbeing one of the most important things in our life.
As an example, people need to have a good health, because if they do not, they are not able to work, study, and basically to live (properly).
So, the government providing medicine can help to citizens to access it (more easily).
To sum up, for these three reasons, I think that having medicine or treatment is more important than only athe prevention of illness.
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Which one do you agree? |
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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Government funding should reflect this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To what extend do you agree? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In some countries, people need an expensive insurance in order to access the national health system, whereas other countries a cheap or no insurance is needed to have medicine or a treatment. In some countries, people need an expensive insurance in order to access the national health system, whereas in other countries |
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I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of the prevention of health problems. I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of Better: I do not agree with the statement because governments should supply these medicines to the citizens instead of focusing on attempting to prevent health problems. |
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To begin with, I know the prevention of any health problem is so important for every people, yet having access to medicine or treatment is the most important aspect caring our health. To begin with, I know the prevention of any health problem is |
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People always get sick and need pills, vaccines, treatments in order to get better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For instance, a simple fever or a stomachache, people need to get those pills for health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently, I got vaccine for COVID19 and the nurse recommended me taking two pills per day to reduce the secondary effects from the vaccine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, if I had not gotten those pills, I would have been sick during those days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Secondly, all elderly people need medicine and treatment because of age. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We already know in this age, people have health problems and they frequently need to see doctor and make medical check-ups constantly. We already know that in this age, people have health problems and they frequently need to see doctor and make medical check-ups constantly. |
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In this point, the treatment and medicine are essential to elderly people. In this |
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For example, until now my grandmother usually goes to the hospital to continue her treatment. For example, "until now" gives the impression it is something that stopped happening, which I don't think is what you meant to say there |
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She has a bones health problem, so her treatment consists to take medicine and make a medical check-up monthly. She has a bones related health problem, so her treatment consists |
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Finally, I believe that the government should be in charge of supplying of medicine as a right, not a business. |
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I support my position due to health is one of the most important things in our life. I support my position due to health |
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As an example, people need to have a good health, because if they do not, they are not able to work, study, basically to live. As an example, people need to have a good health, because if they do not, they are not able to work, study, and basically to live (properly). |
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So, the government providing medicine can help to citizens to access it. So, the government providing medicine can help |
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To sum up, for these three reasons, I think that having medicine or treatment is more important than only a prevention of illness. To sum up, for these three reasons, I think that having medicine or treatment is more important than only |
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