March 27, 2023
Which is your favourite season?
My favourite season is spring, since I don't really like neither too high nor too low temperatures. The weather is usually brilliant and sunny, so you don't have to worry about it when making plans. In addition, it feels nice to wear light and comfortable clothes. During spring, my friends and I go hiking and camping. We spend the journey chatting each other about life and work. It allows me to unwind when I am overwhelmed by workload.
Plus, this is the perfect season for flowers! Last year, I took up gardening, so now I have lots of plants in my garden. In fact, my dog doesn't like them, as he no longer has got as much space as he used to. In any case, I take photos of my flowers which I am most proud of. Sometimes I share them on internet so that other people, who are fond of gardening too, can see them.
Another thing that I like about spring is that my city is more lively than usual. It hosts more festivals and concerts, so I have a huge load of things to do. In fact, I have already bought tickets for a comedy show that I have been looking forward to since last year.
All that said, the only bad thing is that I can go on holiday, as I have to work until summer. So, we have planned going to our summer house to enjoy do some diving and go swimming in the summer. I can't wait!
Which is your favourite season?
"Favorite" is how we spell it in the US.
My favourite season is sSpring, since I don't really like neither too high nor too low temperatures.
"Spring" is capitalized because you're referring to the season.
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My favorite season is Spring, since I neither really like too high or too low temperatures.
The weather is usually brilliant and sunny, so you don't have to worry about it when making plans.
In addition, it feels nice to wear light and comfortable clothes.
During sSpring, my friends and I go hiking and camping.
We spend the journey chatting with each other about life and work.
It allows me to unwind when I am feeling overwhelmed bwith my workload.
or,
It allows me to unwind when I am feeling overwhelmed by work.
Plus, this is the perfect season for flowers!
Last year, I took up gardening, so now I have lots of plants in my garden.
In factUnfortunately, my dog doesn't like them, as he no longer has got as much space as he used to.
"Unfortunately" because your dog's behavior contrasts with yours.
In any case, I take photos of my flowers which I am mostvery proud of.
Sometimes I share them on the internet so that other people, who are fond of gardening too, can see them, too.
Another thing that I like about sSpring is that my city is more livelyier than usual.
It hosts more festivals and concerts, so I have a huge loads of things to do.
This sounds more natural in the US.
In fact, I have already bought tickets for a comedy show that I have been looking forward to since last year.
All tThat said, the only bad thing is that I cannot go on holiday, as I have to work through until sSummer.
So, we have planned goingto go to our summer house to enjoy do some diving and go swimming during the summer.
I can't wait!
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Nicely done!
March 28, 2023
A million thanks
We spend the journey chatting with each other about life and work.
It allows me to unwind when I am overwhelmed by my workload.
Possibilities can include my workload (singular) or workloads (plural).
In any case, I take photos of my flowers of which I am most proud of.
Sometimes I share them on the internet so that other people, who are fond of gardening too, can see them.
All that said, the only bad thing is that I can't go on holiday, as I have to work until summer.
March 28, 2023
Thanks!
Whichat is your favourite season?
Or you could say "Which season is your favorite?"
My favourite season is spring, since I don't really like neither too high nor too lowextreme temperatures.
In addition, it feels nice to wear light and, comfortable clothes.
During spring, my friends and I go hiking and camping.
We spend the journey chatting with each other about life and work.
It allows me to unwind when I am overwhelmed by my workload.
Plus, this is the perfect season for flowers!
Last year, I took up gardening, so now I have lots of plants in my garden.
In fact, my dog doesn't like them, as he no longer has got as much space as he used to.
In any case, I take photos of my flowers which I am most proud of.
Are you proud of the photos or flowers? It is unclear.
All that said, the only bad thing is that I can't go on holiday, as I have to work until summer.
So, we havare planneding on going to our summer house to enjoy do some diving and go swimming in the summer.
I can't wait!
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Excellent job! You write well.
March 27, 2023
Many thanks!
March 27, 2023
In any case, I take photos of my flowers which I am most proud of.
How would the sentence look like if I am proud of the flowers? thanks in advance :)
March 28, 2023
How would the sentence look like if I am proud of the flowers? thanks in advance :)
Great question! You could say "I'm proud of my flowers so I enjoy taking pictures of them." If you'd like to learn more, look up misplaced/dangling modifiers. :)
March 28, 2023
Thanks, I'll have a look at it
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Last year, I took up gardening, so now I have lots of plants in my garden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes I share them on internet so that other people, who are fond of gardening too, can see them. Sometimes I share them on the internet so that other people, who are fond of gardening too, can see them. Sometimes I share them on the internet so that other people |
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Another thing that I like about spring is that my city is more lively than usual. Another thing that I like about |
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It hosts more festivals and concerts, so I have a huge load of things to do. It hosts more festivals and concerts, so I have This sounds more natural in the US. |
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In fact, I have already bought tickets for a comedy show that I have been looking forward to since last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All that said, the only bad thing is that I can go on holiday, as I have to work until summer. All that said, the only bad thing is that I can't go on holiday, as I have to work until summer. All that said, the only bad thing is that I can't go on holiday, as I have to work until summer.
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