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Which histrical figure would you like to meet?

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet. I love his art, water lily in particular, and want to ask him about his many works. If possible, I would like when he was older age. I think experiences in his entire life reflect his art.

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Which historical figure would you like to meet?

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.

I love his art, water lilythe Water Lilies series in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

If possible, I would like when he was older age.to meet him at his older age. (or "in his later years.")

I think his life experiences in his entire lifare reflected in his art.

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Well done!

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TOMO_o

July 25, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

I love his art, water lily in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

It's not something that the formatting available on this site supports, but normally the title of the painting would be in italics to indicate where the title starts and stops. Sometimes quotes are used instead when handwriting or writing on websites that don't support formatting.

If possible, I would like a time when he was older age.

I think experiences in his entire life are reflected by his art.

The experiences aren't the subject in this scene, so it's better to use a passive verb.

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TOMO_o

July 25, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are explanations for each correction and example sentences with natural expressions, which really helps me understand.
I will continue to study hard.

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.

I love his art, whis Water lLilyies in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

"Water Lilies" is the name of one of his art series. If referring to this series, the phrase should be capitalised. However, if referring to the subject of the water lily plant instead and the way he paints them, it would not be capitalised.

> "I love his Water Lilies." (I love his series called "Water Lilies".)
> "I love his water lilies." (I love the way he paints water lilies.)

If possible, I would like to meet him when he was of (an) older age.

Alternatively: "If possible, I would like to meet him when he was older."

I think all the experiences inhe's had throughout his entire life are reflected in his art.

(1) Tweaked the sentence to make it sound more natural.
(2) Experiences do not reflect art; art reflects experiences. Converting this to the passive voice, we say that experiences are reflected in art.

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TOMO_o

July 25, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are explanations for each correction and example sentences with natural expressions, which really helps me understand.
I will continue to study hard.

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.

I love his art, water lily in particular, and wantould like to ask him about his many works.

If possible, I would like'd talk to him when he was older age.

I think his experiences inthrough his entire life reflect his art.

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Great job! Your English is really good :)

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TOMO_o

July 25, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.

I love his art, water lily in particular, and I would want to ask him about his many works.

If possible, I would like to meet him when he was older/of old age.

I think experiences inof his entire life reflect in his art.

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Good job! And great choice! I would also love to have a chat with Monet

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TOMO_o

July 25, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Which histrical figure would you like to meet?


Which historical figure would you like to meet?

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

Which historical figure would you like to meet?

If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.


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If I could meet any historical figure, I would like to meet Claude Monet.

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I love his art, water lily in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.


I love his art, water lily in particular, and I would want to ask him about his many works.

I love his art, water lily in particular, and wantould like to ask him about his many works.

I love his art, whis Water lLilyies in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

"Water Lilies" is the name of one of his art series. If referring to this series, the phrase should be capitalised. However, if referring to the subject of the water lily plant instead and the way he paints them, it would not be capitalised. > "I love his Water Lilies." (I love his series called "Water Lilies".) > "I love his water lilies." (I love the way he paints water lilies.)

I love his art, water lily in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

It's not something that the formatting available on this site supports, but normally the title of the painting would be in italics to indicate where the title starts and stops. Sometimes quotes are used instead when handwriting or writing on websites that don't support formatting.

I love his art, water lilythe Water Lilies series in particular, and want to ask him about his many works.

If possible, I would like when he was older age.


If possible, I would like to meet him when he was older/of old age.

If possible, I would like'd talk to him when he was older age.

If possible, I would like to meet him when he was of (an) older age.

Alternatively: "If possible, I would like to meet him when he was older."

If possible, I would like a time when he was older age.

If possible, I would like when he was older age.to meet him at his older age. (or "in his later years.")

I think experiences in his entire life reflect his art.


I think experiences inof his entire life reflect in his art.

I think his experiences inthrough his entire life reflect his art.

I think all the experiences inhe's had throughout his entire life are reflected in his art.

(1) Tweaked the sentence to make it sound more natural. (2) Experiences do not reflect art; art reflects experiences. Converting this to the passive voice, we say that experiences are reflected in art.

I think experiences in his entire life are reflected by his art.

The experiences aren't the subject in this scene, so it's better to use a passive verb.

I think his life experiences in his entire lifare reflected in his art.

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