Oct. 13, 2025
Which historical moment would you liked to have watched?
I would liked to have an experience that American astronauts stood on the moon at the first time in human history. His name was Neil Armstrong. It was amazing that the technology which was more than 50 years ago could even let them reach the moon. Next is definitely going to be Mars.
Which historical moment would you have liked to have watched?
Reworded for more natural phrasing
I would have liked to have an experience thate moment that an American astronauts stood on the moon atfor the first time in human history.
"Would have liked" is more natural phrasing. Since the next sentence specifies that you are talking about Neil Armstrong in particular, then this sentence should talk about a singular astronaut. "for the first time" is more natural phrasing.
His name was Neil Armstrong.
It wa's amazing that even the technology which was more thanof over 50 years ago could even let them reach the moon.
This sentence should be in present tense since this is something you think now. Reworded for more natural phrasing
Next is definitely going to be Mars.
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I agree that it's amazing the technology in those days was able to get to the moon. Our smartphones now are more powerful than the computers they used then!
Oct. 13, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me how to express things in a more natural way, which is very helpful for my studies.
I always tend to go into too much detail in my explanations.
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Which historical moment would you liked to have watched? Which historical moment would you have liked to Reworded for more natural phrasing |
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His name was Neil Armstrong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would liked to have an experience that American astronauts stood on the moon at the first time in human history. I would have liked to "Would have liked" is more natural phrasing. Since the next sentence specifies that you are talking about Neil Armstrong in particular, then this sentence should talk about a singular astronaut. "for the first time" is more natural phrasing. |
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It was amazing that the technology which was more than 50 years ago could even let them reach the moon. It This sentence should be in present tense since this is something you think now. Reworded for more natural phrasing |
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Next is definitely going to be Mars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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