July 19, 2025
Which do you prefer, sandals or sneakers?
Absolutely sandals. I'm living in Chigasaki, Japan, where is very famous as a sea town. So I often wear sandals at all season except winter. Surfing is also famous in my town but I've been afraid of the sea since I watched " Jaws" when I was teenager.
I'm livinge in Chigasaki, Japan, whereich is a very famous as a sea town.
So I often wear sandals atin all seasons except winter.
SurfingMy town is also famous in my townfor surfing, but I've been afraid of the sea since I watched " Jaws" when I was teenager.
July 20, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm living in Chigasaki, Japan, whereich is very a famous as a sea town.
So I often wear sandals at all seasonll-year-round except winter.
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Awesome job! Your English is really great and I only needed to adapt a bit of word order. Amazing work :)
July 19, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm living in Chigasaki, Japan, whereich is a very famous as a sea town.
Referencing something just previously mentioned (Chigasaki) => which is = Chigasaki is
So I often wear sandals at alloften, (every season) except for winter.
Leaving off "every season" would be cleaner without losing anything
Surfing is also famous in my town, but I've been (too) afraid of the sea since I watched " Jaws" when I was teenager.
I would use "too" here because you are indirectly saying that you are "too afraid" to go surfing because of Jaws.
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Great job
July 19, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are explanations for each sentence, which really helps me understand.
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So I often wear sandals at all season except winter. So I Leaving off "every season" would be cleaner without losing anything So I often wear sandals a So I often wear sandals |
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Surfing is also famous in my town but I've been afraid of the sea since I watched " Jaws" when I was teenager. Surfing is also famous in my town, but I've been (too) afraid of the sea since I watched " I would use "too" here because you are indirectly saying that you are "too afraid" to go surfing because of Jaws.
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