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Which country was the best in what respect?

I have been almost twent countries for two years. Unfortunately, I haven’t travelled any countries recently because I have to work. I miss new trips and meeting new friends.
Please, imagine ! When you arrive new country, you hear different sounds and look different many people. You might be excited or terrible. How can I go to city center? Which bus is going to my hotel? I miss it all…
I told that I travelled twenty country. Now, I am talking about these countries.
I think the best natural country was Switzerland. I have been Zurich, Interlaken, Lauterbrunnen Lungern, Luzern and Basel. Switzerland’s villages were like a dream. There were wonderful views everywhere. I have felt peace and relax. Switzerland is famuous for trains. These trains usually go to wonderful route as Bernia Express. I realized life was continuing slowly. People don’t care about theirs future because there wasn’t anything bad vibe for them. Economy is very well.
I think the best responsible country is Austria. I don’t like visit museums, but there were many important museaums in this country. You should go to Hallstat with daily tours. There were many things to discover.
I think the best old builds countries are Belgium and Czech. When you come to Belgium, you should definitely visit Brugge and Gent.
I think the best colorful and funny country is Netherlands. Oh, please don’t say Holland. Netherlands people hate it. I have tried nice cheeses. There were canals and old builds in Amsterdam. You should definitely get canal tour and visit Red Light district. Don’t trust to girl in there.
Zagreb, Bucharest and Sofia were boring.
The best interesting builds were in Italy. There were lots of good food in Italy. People were similar to Turkish ones. I have visited Venice, Florence and Toscana.
I have also visited other Europa countries. Hungry, Slovania, Slovakia, Greece, Denmark, Germany… Thanks for reading !

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Which country was the best and in what respect?

I have been to almost twenty countries forin the past two years.

Unfortunately, I haven't travelled any countrieoverseas recently because I have to work.

I miss going on (new) trips and meeting new friends.

Please, imagine !

When you arrive in a new country, you hear different sounds and look different from many people.

You might be excited or terriblefied.

How can I get to tohe city center?

"Go" and "get", while similar, are two different actions. To go is to head towards the city center, while to get there is to actually arrive at the place. The challenge lies not in going there, but rather getting there. For this reason, "get" seems more natural to me here.

Which bus is goinggoes to my hotel?

I miss it all…
I
tolsaid that I've travelled to twenty countryies.

"Told" must be followed by an object.
> I told that I was going out. ❌
> I told HIM that I was going out. ✅

Now, I am talking about theose countries.

"Those" strikes me as more appropriate here, since you're referring to the previous time you mentioned the twenty countries, which was quite a while ago all the way at the start of the text.

I think the best natural countcountry in terms of its nature and scenery was Switzerland.

It might be unclear what you mean by a "natural country".

I have been to Zurich, Interlaken, Lauterbrunnen, Lungern, Luzern and Basel.

Switzerland’s villages were like a dream.

There were wonderful views everywhere.

I have felt at peace and relaxed.

The phrase is "feel at peace" or "feel peaceful".

Switzerland is famuous for its trains.

These trains usually go torun on a wonderful route asnd are known as the Bernia Express.

I realized life was continuingthere progressed slowly.

Added "there" for more clarity: you're referring to life in Switzerland specifically as opposed to life in general.

People don’idn't care about theirs futures because there wasn’t anything bad vibe for themy didn't feel bad about it.

(1) "Theirs" is used when it is not followed by a noun. Otherwise, we use "their".
> This pen is theirs. ✅
> This is their pen. ✅
> This is theirs pen. ❌

(2) The second half of the sentence is awkward, so I have altered it slightly.

EThe economy is (doing) very well.

I think the best responsible country icountry in terms of its history and culture was Austria.

(1) It is also unclear what is meant by a "responsible country".
(2) Keep the tense consistent. When introducing Switzerland, you used the past tense (which is correct), so you should use "was".

I don’t like visiting museums, but there were many important museaums in this country.

You should go to Hallstat with daily tourson daily tours in Hallstatt.

Restructured the sentence so that it sounds clearer and a little more natural.

There were many things to discover.

I think the best old builds countries acountries with the best historical buildings were Belgium and the Czech Republic.

WhenIf you comego to Belgium, you should definitely visit Brugge and Ghent.

(1) "If" might be more appropriate here, as "when" makes the assumption that the reader will go to Belgium.
(2) "Come" implies that you are writing this in Belgium. If you are not in Belgium, you should use "go".

I think the best colorful and funnyfunniest and most colorful country iswas the Netherlands.

I shifted "funniest" before "most colorful", because it sounds more natural this way. Writing "most colorful and funniest" might suggest the phrase "most funniest", which is an awkward expression.

Oh, please don’t say Holland.

Netherlands peopleers hate it.

I have tried nice cheeses there.

Adding the "there" might make the sentence clearer.

There were canals and old buildings in Amsterdam.

You should definitely geto on a canal tour and visit Red Lthe red-light district.

"Red-light district" is not a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalised as such.

Don’t trust to girl in there.

I am not sure what you meant by this sentence. Perhaps you can provide the native text in a comment?

Zagreb, Bucharest and Sofia were boring.

The bemost interesting buildings were in Italy.

There were lots of good food in Italy.

PeoplThe locals there were similar to Turkish onespeople.

(1) In this context, I wouldn't suggest using "ones" to refer to people because it seems quite odd. It might even appear to be a little dehumanising.
(2) I replaced "people" with "locals" because I want to use the phrase "Turkish people" without repeating the word "people".

I have visited Venice, Florence and Touscanay.

To me, the present perfect tense ("have visited") doesn't seem very appropriate in this sentence, because you'd already established that you're writing about Italy before this, in which case you can just the simple past tense to narrate what you did. Compare this to the next sentence, where it's your first time establishing the topic as "other European countries".

I have also visited other Europaean countries.

Hungary, Slovaenia, Slovakia, Greece, Denmark, Germany… Thanks for reading !

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Liderkarga

Aug. 5, 2025

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Which country was the best in what respect?


Which country was the best and in what respect?

I have been almost twent countries for two years.


I have been to almost twenty countries forin the past two years.

Unfortunately, I haven’t travelled any countries recently because I have to work.


Unfortunately, I haven't travelled any countrieoverseas recently because I have to work.

I miss new trips and meeting new friends.


I miss going on (new) trips and meeting new friends.

Please, imagine !


Please, imagine !

When you arrive new country, you hear different sounds and look different many people.


When you arrive in a new country, you hear different sounds and look different from many people.

You might be excited or terrible.


You might be excited or terriblefied.

How can I go to city center?


How can I get to tohe city center?

"Go" and "get", while similar, are two different actions. To go is to head towards the city center, while to get there is to actually arrive at the place. The challenge lies not in going there, but rather getting there. For this reason, "get" seems more natural to me here.

Which bus is going to my hotel?


Which bus is goinggoes to my hotel?

I miss it all… I told that I travelled twenty country.


I miss it all…
I
tolsaid that I've travelled to twenty countryies.

"Told" must be followed by an object. > I told that I was going out. ❌ > I told HIM that I was going out. ✅

Switzerland is famuous for trains.


Switzerland is famuous for its trains.

These trains usually go to wonderful route as Bernia Express.


These trains usually go torun on a wonderful route asnd are known as the Bernia Express.

I realized life was continuing slowly.


I realized life was continuingthere progressed slowly.

Added "there" for more clarity: you're referring to life in Switzerland specifically as opposed to life in general.

People don’t care about theirs future because there wasn’t anything bad vibe for them.


People don’idn't care about theirs futures because there wasn’t anything bad vibe for themy didn't feel bad about it.

(1) "Theirs" is used when it is not followed by a noun. Otherwise, we use "their". > This pen is theirs. ✅ > This is their pen. ✅ > This is theirs pen. ❌ (2) The second half of the sentence is awkward, so I have altered it slightly.

Economy is very well.


EThe economy is (doing) very well.

I think the best responsible country is Austria.


I think the best responsible country icountry in terms of its history and culture was Austria.

(1) It is also unclear what is meant by a "responsible country". (2) Keep the tense consistent. When introducing Switzerland, you used the past tense (which is correct), so you should use "was".

I don’t like visit museums, but there were many important museaums in this country.


I don’t like visiting museums, but there were many important museaums in this country.

You should go to Hallstat with daily tours.


You should go to Hallstat with daily tourson daily tours in Hallstatt.

Restructured the sentence so that it sounds clearer and a little more natural.

There were many things to discover.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the best old builds countries are Belgium and Czech.


I think the best old builds countries acountries with the best historical buildings were Belgium and the Czech Republic.

When you come to Belgium, you should definitely visit Brugge and Gent.


WhenIf you comego to Belgium, you should definitely visit Brugge and Ghent.

(1) "If" might be more appropriate here, as "when" makes the assumption that the reader will go to Belgium. (2) "Come" implies that you are writing this in Belgium. If you are not in Belgium, you should use "go".

I think the best colorful and funny country is Netherlands.


I think the best colorful and funnyfunniest and most colorful country iswas the Netherlands.

I shifted "funniest" before "most colorful", because it sounds more natural this way. Writing "most colorful and funniest" might suggest the phrase "most funniest", which is an awkward expression.

Oh, please don’t say Holland.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Netherlands people hate it.


Netherlands peopleers hate it.

I have tried nice cheeses.


I have tried nice cheeses there.

Adding the "there" might make the sentence clearer.

There were canals and old builds in Amsterdam.


There were canals and old buildings in Amsterdam.

You should definitely get canal tour and visit Red Light district.


You should definitely geto on a canal tour and visit Red Lthe red-light district.

"Red-light district" is not a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalised as such.

Don’t trust to girl in there.


Don’t trust to girl in there.

I am not sure what you meant by this sentence. Perhaps you can provide the native text in a comment?

Zagreb, Bucharest and Sofia were boring.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The best interesting builds were in Italy.


The bemost interesting buildings were in Italy.

There were lots of good food in Italy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People were similar to Turkish ones.


PeoplThe locals there were similar to Turkish onespeople.

(1) In this context, I wouldn't suggest using "ones" to refer to people because it seems quite odd. It might even appear to be a little dehumanising. (2) I replaced "people" with "locals" because I want to use the phrase "Turkish people" without repeating the word "people".

I have visited Venice, Florence and Toscana.


I have visited Venice, Florence and Touscanay.

To me, the present perfect tense ("have visited") doesn't seem very appropriate in this sentence, because you'd already established that you're writing about Italy before this, in which case you can just the simple past tense to narrate what you did. Compare this to the next sentence, where it's your first time establishing the topic as "other European countries".

I have also visited other Europa countries.


I have also visited other Europaean countries.

Hungry, Slovania, Slovakia, Greece, Denmark, Germany… Thanks for reading !


Hungary, Slovaenia, Slovakia, Greece, Denmark, Germany… Thanks for reading !

Now, I am talking about these countries.


Now, I am talking about theose countries.

"Those" strikes me as more appropriate here, since you're referring to the previous time you mentioned the twenty countries, which was quite a while ago all the way at the start of the text.

I think the best natural country was Switzerland.


I think the best natural countcountry in terms of its nature and scenery was Switzerland.

It might be unclear what you mean by a "natural country".

I have been Zurich, Interlaken, Lauterbrunnen Lungern, Luzern and Basel.


I have been to Zurich, Interlaken, Lauterbrunnen, Lungern, Luzern and Basel.

Switzerland’s villages were like a dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were wonderful views everywhere.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have felt peace and relax.


I have felt at peace and relaxed.

The phrase is "feel at peace" or "feel peaceful".

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