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Oct. 16, 2024

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Which can be more valued? Elder people or youth?

Older people in a society can be respected, whereas in another society their counterpart might not be respectful as younger people. In my opinion, everyone is equal, and both of these two groups are equally important.

In some Asian countries, the custom "respecting elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth. What is worse, some of youth even have to be confronted with career ceiling due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation. Young people's ideas and emotions can be suppressed, and hence it can precipitate rebellions, high rates of suicide and a large amount of brain drain.

On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept to and apply it to make a contribution to society. Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up, building a fundamental condition where the young's efforts will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed. It may be the ideal condition which our human beings have been progressively pursuing.

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Which canshould be more valued? Elder people orThe elderly or the youth?

Older people in a society can bare respected, whereas in another society their counterparties, they might not be respectfuled as younger people.

In my opinion, everyone is equal, and both of these two groups are equally important.

In some Asian countries, the custom of "respecting elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue and can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth.

What is worse, some of youth are even have to be confrontfaced with careerglass ceilings in their careers due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation.

Young people's ideas and emotions can bare suppressed, and hence it can precipitaincite rebellions, high rates of suicide and a large amount of brain drain.

On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept to and apply itutilize their strengths to make a contribution to society.

'to make a contribution to society' is correct, but 'contribute to society' sounds more natural.

Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up, building a foundamental condition where the young's effortsefforts of the youth will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed.

It may be the ideal condition which our human beings have been progressively pursuing.

Which canshould be more valued? Elder peoples or youth?

Older people in aone society can be respected, whereas in another society their counterpart might not be as respectfuled as younger people.

"Respected" - people give you respect
"Respectful" - you give others respect

In my opinion, everyone is equal, and both of these two groups are equally important.

In some Asian countries, the custom "of respecting (one's) elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue and can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth.

What is worse, some of youth even have to be confronted with a career ceiling due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation.

Young people's ideas and emotions can be suppressed, and hence it can precipitate rebellions, high rates of suicide and a large amount of brain drain.

On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept ato and apply it to make a contribution to society.

"exert what they are adept at" - This works. A common way of saying this would be "leverage their skills/strengths"

Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up about, building a fundamentalthe conditions where the young's effortsefforts of the young will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed.

It may be the ideal condition which our human beings have been progressively pursuing.

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You're right, there's a balance that needs to be struck. Both groups are very important!

Which can be more valued? Elder people or youth?


Which canshould be more valued? Elder peoples or youth?

Which canshould be more valued? Elder people orThe elderly or the youth?

Older people in a society can be respected, whereas in another society their counterpart might not be respectful as younger people.


Older people in aone society can be respected, whereas in another society their counterpart might not be as respectfuled as younger people.

"Respected" - people give you respect "Respectful" - you give others respect

Older people in a society can bare respected, whereas in another society their counterparties, they might not be respectfuled as younger people.

In my opinion, everyone is equal, and both of these two groups are equally important.


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In some Asian countries, the custom "respecting elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth.


In some Asian countries, the custom "of respecting (one's) elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue and can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth.

In some Asian countries, the custom of "respecting elders" which, though is regarded as something obsolete nowadays, has always been perceived as a good virtue and can cause some older people to be arrogant and to rampantly criticize and bully youth.

What is worse, some of youth even have to be confronted with career ceiling due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation.


What is worse, some of youth even have to be confronted with a career ceiling due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation.

What is worse, some of youth are even have to be confrontfaced with careerglass ceilings in their careers due to their senior colleagues' power, oppression and alienation.

Young people's ideas and emotions can be suppressed, and hence it can precipitate rebellions, high rates of suicide and a large amount of brain drain.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Young people's ideas and emotions can bare suppressed, and hence it can precipitaincite rebellions, high rates of suicide and a large amount of brain drain.

On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept to and apply it to make a contribution to society.


On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept ato and apply it to make a contribution to society.

"exert what they are adept at" - This works. A common way of saying this would be "leverage their skills/strengths"

On the other hand, in some cultures, creativity and innovation are encouraged, which is suitable for young people, for they could exert what they are adept to and apply itutilize their strengths to make a contribution to society.

'to make a contribution to society' is correct, but 'contribute to society' sounds more natural.

Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up, building a fundamental condition where the young's efforts will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed.


Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up about, building a fundamentalthe conditions where the young's effortsefforts of the young will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed.

Moreover, in turn, encouraged audacious proposals in politics can be spoken up, building a foundamental condition where the young's effortsefforts of the youth will pay off because the rights they strive for can be confirmed.

It may be the ideal condition which our human beings have been progressively pursuing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It may be the ideal condition which our human beings have been progressively pursuing.

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