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tommy

Jan. 26, 2021

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Where to Try Out My English Skills

I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching amazing starry sky. Canada is also one of my next travel destination since aurora can be seen there. Traveling abroad was most important motivation for learning English. I always devoted my long-term paid holiday to go abroad.
Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand. I have to accept that my English skills aren't enough to communicate with native speakers. But, I guess that New Zealand English totally differ from U.S. English which we have learned for a long time in the Japanese educational system. English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences of English pronunciation and intonation.
Taking into account my bucket list, I should get used to New Zealand English.

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Where to Try Out My English Skills

I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching the amazing starry skyies.

Canada is also one of my next travel destinations since the aurora can be seen there.

It's not necessary to add "borealis" to the sentence so you're good here.

Traveling abroad was most importany biggest motivation for learning English.

Someone corrected "traveling" with two L's but, in the US, we use the one L version much more often.

I always devoted my long-term paid holiday to go abroad.

Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself be understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand.

I have to accept that my English skills aren't enough to communicate with native speakers.

But, I guess that New Zealand English is totally different from U.S. English which we have been learneding for a long time in the Japanese educational system.

English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences ofin English pronunciation and intonation.

Taking into account my bucket list, I should get used to New Zealand English.

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Great job! I hope you're able to visit the US someday, too. That way you can practice your US English. :)

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tommy

Jan. 26, 2021

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I really appreciate that you often correct my articles! Yes, I want to visit the US as well, and communicate with local people in English.

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mari

Jan. 27, 2021

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良かった!楽しみにしています。

Where to Try Out My English Skills

I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching the amazing starry sky.

Canada is also one of my next travel destinations since the aurora borealis can be seen there.

Travelling abroad was the most important motivation for learning English.

Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand were talking about.

I have to accept that my English skills aren't good enough to communicate with native speakers.

But, I guess that the English that is spoken in New Zealand English totally differs from U.S. English which we have learned for a long time in the Japanese educational system.

English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences ofin English pronunciation and intonation.

Taking into account my bucket list, I should get used to New Zealand English.

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tommy

Jan. 26, 2021

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Thank you for correcting me!

Where to Try Out My English Skills


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I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching amazing starry sky.


I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching the amazing starry sky.

I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching the amazing starry skyies.

Canada is also one of my next travel destination since aurora can be seen there.


Canada is also one of my next travel destinations since the aurora borealis can be seen there.

Canada is also one of my next travel destinations since the aurora can be seen there.

It's not necessary to add "borealis" to the sentence so you're good here.

Traveling abroad was most important motivation for learning English.


Travelling abroad was the most important motivation for learning English.

Traveling abroad was most importany biggest motivation for learning English.

Someone corrected "traveling" with two L's but, in the US, we use the one L version much more often.

I always devoted my long-term paid holiday to go abroad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand.


Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand were talking about.

Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself be understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand.

I have to accept that my English skills aren't enough to communicate with native speakers.


I have to accept that my English skills aren't good enough to communicate with native speakers.

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But, I guess that New Zealand English totally differ from U.S. English which we have learned for a long time in the Japanese educational system.


But, I guess that the English that is spoken in New Zealand English totally differs from U.S. English which we have learned for a long time in the Japanese educational system.

But, I guess that New Zealand English is totally different from U.S. English which we have been learneding for a long time in the Japanese educational system.

English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences of English pronunciation and intonation.


English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences ofin English pronunciation and intonation.

English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences ofin English pronunciation and intonation.

Taking into account my bucket list, I should get used to New Zealand English.


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