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June 23, 2025

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Where did you go on your last trip?

Although I haven’t gone to trip these years, I would like to go to Italy. I’ve often heard that foods in Italy are delicious and there are historical structures. But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might should trip in Japan at first.

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Although I haven’t gone ton a trip these last few years, I would like to go to Italy.

I’ve often heard that Italian foods in Italy ares delicious and there are historical structures.

But going to foreign countries is too much costlyexpensive, so I might should trip travel within Japan at first.

"But going to foreign countries is too expensive. . ." is the most natural way to phrase this. However, "But going to foreign countries is too costly. . . " or "But going to foreign countries is much too costly. . . " are also acceptable alternatives.

"Might" and "should" cannot be used with each other. "Might" is a probability that you may/may not do something. "Should" means that you are strongly suggesting/recommending that you perform a certain action. However, "should maybe" is also a phrase that you can use. It's meaning is not as strong as "should" and means that it may be best to do something.

I'm making some assumptions, but since you're a native Japanese speaker I'm assuming that you still live in Japan. If that's the case is that you're still residing in Japan and you're traveling to other places in Japan then it would be ". . . so I might travel within Japan first." However, if you're residing outside of Japan, then it would be ". . . travel to Japan".

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Good job!

The last place that I traveled to within the United States was to Dallas for a Hatsune Miku concert last year in April. The last trip I took out of the country was to Vietnam to visit my relatives back when I was in 5th grade (around 10 years old).

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TOMO_o

June 24, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Each and every detailed explanation helps me to understand better. I still have a lot to learn.

Although I haven’t gone to triptravelled these years, I woul'd like to go to Italy.

I’ve often heard that Italian foods in Italy ares delicious and there are historical structures.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might should trip intravel to Japan at first.

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June 23, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Although I haven’t gone ton trips theseis years, I would like to go to Italy.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldtake a trip into Japan at first.

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June 23, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Although I haven’t gone ton a trip in these past few years, I would like to go to Italy.

These years doesn't feel right. I don't really know how to explain it better, sorry.

It would be best to do it like I explained above if you are insistant upon it needing to have the word "year" in it but you could alternatively say:

"Although I haven’t gone on a trip recently, I would like to go to Italy."

Or even:

"Although I haven’t gone on a trip these days, I would like to go to Italy."

I know you meant years and not days but the "days" implies "years". It could mean days or months or years and will only be revealed which it is if you choose to give that information in another sentence. (Or in the first sentence I corrected it to)

I’ve often heard that foods in Italy areis delicious and there are historical structures.

We talk about food in the singular even if it is plural. "Are" is changed to "is" because I changed it to singular.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldplan a trip into Japan at first.

"Too much costly" sounds like something my Indian friends would say. I happen to really enjoy this mistake and we laugh about it all the time, so thank you for giving me this fun reminder.

Here are some better ways of saying it:

"But going to foreign countries is too costly/expensive"

I would use expensive instead of costly. It just sounds more natural. Costly still works though, I'm just nitpicking.

"But going to foreign countries costs too much"

If you want to use the words "too much" then costly to moves to the front.



For the end I would say it the way I did above but here is an alternative that uses your word "should":
"so I should plan a trip to Japan first."

It comes down to whether you are undecided whether you will make plans or not. The first one is unsure but with the word "should" it makes it more certain that you're going to plan your Japan trip first.


Overall good job!

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June 23, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Each and every detailed explanation helps me to understand better. I still have a lot to learn.

Where dDid yYou gGo oOn yYour lLast tTrip?

Titles are always capitalized.

Although I haven’t gone ton trip theses in years, I would like to go to Italy.

Word choice is incorrect, small errors.

I’ve often heard that foods in Italy areis delicious and there are many historical structures.

ButHowever, going to foreign countries is too much costlyexpensive, so I might /should trip avel within Japan at first.

You can can't start a sentence with but when writing typically. You can say too costly or too expensive is more formal. You can use might or shoud not both.

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Great job, only some small errors. Keep writing!

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TOMO_o

June 23, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your detailed explanations help me understand better.

Where dDid yYou gGo oOn yYour lLast tTrip?

Title capitalization

Although I haven’t gone ton a trip these past few years, I would like to go to Italy.

We say we "go on a trip"

I’ve often heard that the foods in Italy areis delicious and there are many historical structures.

"Food" will almost always be referred to as singular instead of plural

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldgo on a trip in Japan at first.

"Too much" is for referring to a quantity or a habit (there is too much sauce on my pasta / she works out too much). For adjectives, only "too" is correct (the sun is too bright).

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Good job

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June 23, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your detailed explanations help me understand better.

Where did you go on your last trip?


Where dDid yYou gGo oOn yYour lLast tTrip?

Title capitalization

Where dDid yYou gGo oOn yYour lLast tTrip?

Titles are always capitalized.

Although I haven’t gone to trip these years, I would like to go to Italy.


Although I haven’t gone ton a trip these past few years, I would like to go to Italy.

We say we "go on a trip"

Although I haven’t gone ton trip theses in years, I would like to go to Italy.

Word choice is incorrect, small errors.

Although I haven’t gone ton a trip in these past few years, I would like to go to Italy.

These years doesn't feel right. I don't really know how to explain it better, sorry. It would be best to do it like I explained above if you are insistant upon it needing to have the word "year" in it but you could alternatively say: "Although I haven’t gone on a trip recently, I would like to go to Italy." Or even: "Although I haven’t gone on a trip these days, I would like to go to Italy." I know you meant years and not days but the "days" implies "years". It could mean days or months or years and will only be revealed which it is if you choose to give that information in another sentence. (Or in the first sentence I corrected it to)

Although I haven’t gone ton trips theseis years, I would like to go to Italy.

Although I haven’t gone to triptravelled these years, I woul'd like to go to Italy.

Although I haven’t gone ton a trip these last few years, I would like to go to Italy.

I’ve often heard that foods in Italy are delicious and there are historical structures.


I’ve often heard that the foods in Italy areis delicious and there are many historical structures.

"Food" will almost always be referred to as singular instead of plural

I’ve often heard that foods in Italy areis delicious and there are many historical structures.

I’ve often heard that foods in Italy areis delicious and there are historical structures.

We talk about food in the singular even if it is plural. "Are" is changed to "is" because I changed it to singular.

I’ve often heard that Italian foods in Italy ares delicious and there are historical structures.

I’ve often heard that Italian foods in Italy ares delicious and there are historical structures.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might should trip in Japan at first.


But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldgo on a trip in Japan at first.

"Too much" is for referring to a quantity or a habit (there is too much sauce on my pasta / she works out too much). For adjectives, only "too" is correct (the sun is too bright).

ButHowever, going to foreign countries is too much costlyexpensive, so I might /should trip avel within Japan at first.

You can can't start a sentence with but when writing typically. You can say too costly or too expensive is more formal. You can use might or shoud not both.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldplan a trip into Japan at first.

"Too much costly" sounds like something my Indian friends would say. I happen to really enjoy this mistake and we laugh about it all the time, so thank you for giving me this fun reminder. Here are some better ways of saying it: "But going to foreign countries is too costly/expensive" I would use expensive instead of costly. It just sounds more natural. Costly still works though, I'm just nitpicking. "But going to foreign countries costs too much" If you want to use the words "too much" then costly to moves to the front. For the end I would say it the way I did above but here is an alternative that uses your word "should": "so I should plan a trip to Japan first." It comes down to whether you are undecided whether you will make plans or not. The first one is unsure but with the word "should" it makes it more certain that you're going to plan your Japan trip first. Overall good job!

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might shouldtake a trip into Japan at first.

But going to foreign countries is too much costly, so I might should trip intravel to Japan at first.

But going to foreign countries is too much costlyexpensive, so I might should trip travel within Japan at first.

"But going to foreign countries is too expensive. . ." is the most natural way to phrase this. However, "But going to foreign countries is too costly. . . " or "But going to foreign countries is much too costly. . . " are also acceptable alternatives. "Might" and "should" cannot be used with each other. "Might" is a probability that you may/may not do something. "Should" means that you are strongly suggesting/recommending that you perform a certain action. However, "should maybe" is also a phrase that you can use. It's meaning is not as strong as "should" and means that it may be best to do something. I'm making some assumptions, but since you're a native Japanese speaker I'm assuming that you still live in Japan. If that's the case is that you're still residing in Japan and you're traveling to other places in Japan then it would be ". . . so I might travel within Japan first." However, if you're residing outside of Japan, then it would be ". . . travel to Japan".

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