Nov. 9, 2021
Where Are We Going
When I was a child I thinked the world will be a pleasent place where all people could live comfortably and in peace with the help of technological avances. Now instead, I think that the humanity will last about a hundred years or less, because the being human is very selfish and destructive and I think we are going straight towards our self extermination. I watch the present and I don't see a better world that last century. probablyt, In the next 10 years rich people will be even more rich and the poor people will be even more poor, and the middle class will go to less. I would wish to be wrong, but today the future don't seem very good.
Where Are We Going
When I was a child I thinkedought the world will beis a pleaseant place where all people could live comfortably and in peace with the help of technological advances.
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Now insteadBut now, I think that the humanity will last for about a hundred years or less, because the being human ishuman (beings) are very selfish and destructive and. I think we are going straight towards our selfown extermination.
pProbablyt, I in the next 10 years, rich people will become even more rich andricher, while the poor people will become even more poor, and the middle class will go to lepoorer. Middle class will also become part of the poor class.
I wouldDeep down, I wish to be wrong, but today the future don't seem very good.
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When I was a child I thinked the world will be a pleasent place where all people could live comfortably and in peace with the help of technological avances. When I was a child I th Past tense of think is thought |
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Now instead, I think that the humanity will last about a hundred years or less, because the being human is very selfish and destructive and I think we are going straight towards our self extermination.
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I watch the present and I don't see a better world that last century. |
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probablyt, In the next 10 years rich people will be even more rich and the poor people will be even more poor, and the middle class will go to less.
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I would wish to be wrong, but today the future don't seem very good.
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