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TOMO_o

Feb. 27, 2025

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When Was Your First Love?

It was when I was 11 years old. I was good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feeling. One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend. I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.

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I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

One day, surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that theyings went well between them.

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Very good! It seems we all remember our first love, right!

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TOMO_o

March 1, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

When Was Your First Love?

ItMy first love (experience) was when I was 11 (years old).

OPTION A: I was a good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.¶
OPTION B: We were good friends and I couldn't tell her my feelings
.

OPTION B is more succinct.

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 28, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

When Was Your First Love?

It was when I was 11 years old.

I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that they wentgot along well.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 28, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

When Was Your First Love?


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It was when I was 11 years old.


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ItMy first love (experience) was when I was 11 (years old).

I was good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feeling.


I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

OPTION A: I was a good friend with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.¶
OPTION B: We were good friends and I couldn't tell her my feelings
.

OPTION B is more succinct.

I was good friends with her and couldn't tell her about my feelings.

One day surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One day, surprisingly, she started dating my best friend.

I was very shocked but also hoped that they went well.


I was very shocked but also hoped that they wentgot along well.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was very shocked but also hoped that theyings went well between them.

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