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When uncommon habit gives fantastic results
I have a very special personal culture created and grown long years inside my appartments.
And in my culture there is one habit which is , I guess, unique, rare and uncommon.
At least I do not know if it is exist somewhere else.
It is the perfect cycle of sleeping, wandering to the kitchen, eating donuts and binge-watching TV shows.
I do it every weekend.
It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment, I can say it is a true cultural masterpiece!
When an uncommon habit gives fantastic results
I have a very special personal culture created and grown longover many years inside my appartments.
Originally, I had rewritten this as: "...personal culture which I have perfected over many years...". However, this would have had a sense of intentionality and dedication to it which may not have been intended here.
"Culture" is a strange word to use in this way. "Culture" is usually something which multiple people partake in. Just one person cannot have a unique culture, because that is not what "culture" means. It doesn't feel totally wrong, but it does feel just a little weird to me.
And in mythis culture there is one habit which is , I guess, unique, rare and uncommon and rare.
You could say "this culture" instead of "my culture" to further clarify that we are talking about the "special personal culture" you have mentioned previously, and not the more general culture which "my culture" usually implies on its own.
Also, as another user has mentioned, "uncommon" isn't necessary after "rare". "Uncommon" itself is in-between "common" and "rare".
At least I do not know if it is exists somewhere else.
Nothing can "be [present tense verb]". This would sound strange.
It is the perfect cycle of sleeping, wandering to the kitchen, eating donuts and binge-watching TV shows.
I do it every weekend.
It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment,. I can say it is a true cultural masterpiece!
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When uncommonan unusual habit gives fantastic results
Honestly, not sure why, but it sounds better...
I have a very special personal culture created and grown over the long years spent inside my appartments.
And in my culture there is one habit which is , I guess, unique, rare and uncommon.
"rare" and "uncommon" have overlapping meanings so I'd omit one, probably "uncommon," because "rare" emphasizes the rarity more than "uncommon"
At least I do not know if it is exists somewhere else.
It is the perfect cycle of sleeping, wandering to the kitchen, eating donuts and binge-watching TV shows.
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I do it every weekend.
It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment, and I can say it is a true cultural masterpiece!
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When uncommon habit gives fantastic results When Honestly, not sure why, but it sounds better... When an uncommon habit gives fantastic results |
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I have a very special personal culture created and grown long years inside my appartments. I have a very special personal culture created and grown over the long years spent inside my ap I have a very special personal culture created and grown Originally, I had rewritten this as: "...personal culture which I have perfected over many years...". However, this would have had a sense of intentionality and dedication to it which may not have been intended here. "Culture" is a strange word to use in this way. "Culture" is usually something which multiple people partake in. Just one person cannot have a unique culture, because that is not what "culture" means. It doesn't feel totally wrong, but it does feel just a little weird to me. |
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And in my culture there is one habit which is , I guess, unique, rare and uncommon. And in my culture there is one "rare" and "uncommon" have overlapping meanings so I'd omit one, probably "uncommon," because "rare" emphasizes the rarity more than "uncommon" And in You could say "this culture" instead of "my culture" to further clarify that we are talking about the "special personal culture" you have mentioned previously, and not the more general culture which "my culture" usually implies on its own. Also, as another user has mentioned, "uncommon" isn't necessary after "rare". "Uncommon" itself is in-between "common" and "rare". |
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At least I do not know if it is exist somewhere else. At least I do not know if it At least I do not know if it Nothing can "be [present tense verb]". This would sound strange. |
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It is the perfect cycle of sleeping, wandering to the kitchen, eating donuts and binge-watching TV shows. It is the lol This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment, I can say it is a true cultural masterpiece! It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment, and I can say it is a true cultural masterpiece! It's a tradition of balancing rest, snacks and entertainment |
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