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Professeur_Chantecler

June 16, 2024

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When the Walk Against Far Right Came to Me

Yesterday I was in Paris. I had planned this long ago with a few friends. We just wanted to spend some time together. At that time we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation. All you need to know, you already know: far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know). By early July, there will be a votation that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.

A country turns fascist when most of its citizens have lost all of their hope of being happy and see only one way to feel better, making the other ones more miserable than them.

So, yesterday there was a huge march against far right, from place de la République to place de la Nation. Right in the middle of it, close to place de la Bastille, there was a little Vietnamese vegan restaurant where I had lunch with three dear friends of mine. After the dessert, we basically only had to get out of the restaurant to get part of the demonstration. It was huge and very positive. When we were approaching the end of it, we walked back to Bastille. From there we could see that the boulevard Beaumarchais was still full of demonstrators until the departure of the walk. In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.

That made my day. I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, social rights… We sang slogans together among which, my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s good to mesure the number of people healthy in mind there are still in my country, like the number of hopes left for a more kindly world.

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When the Walk Against The Far Right Came to Me

Think you need a "the" because far right is like a noun group of people. It sound better to me also.

Yesterday I was in Paris.

I had planned this trip long ago with a few friends.

We just wanted to spend some time together.

At that/ the time we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

Another way to say

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation./ the whole political situation.

All you need to know, you already know: the far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know).

By early July, there will be a votation that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.

So, yesterday there was a huge march against the far right, from place de la République to place de la Nation.

Right in the middle of it, close to place de la Bastille, there was a little Vietnamese vegan restaurant where I had lunch with three dear friends of mine.

After the dessert, we basically only had to get out of the restaurant to getbe part of the demonstration.

It was huge and very positive.

When we were approaching the end of it, we walked back to Bastille.

From there we could see that the boulevard Beaumarchais was still full of demonstrators until the departure of the walk.

In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.

Not sure what walker flow is. Do you mean the flow of events was unbroken? Or a certain unbroken energy?

That made my day.

I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, social rights… We sang slogans together among which, my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s good to measure the number of people healthy in mind thereat are still in my country, like the number of hopes left for a more kindly world.

Yesterday I was in Paris.

I had planned this longtrip a long time ago with a few friends.

We just wanted to spend some time together.

At thate time, we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation. of France right now, though.

All you need to know, you is stuff you probably already know: the  far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know).

By early July, there will be a votation that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.

A country turns fascist when most of its citizens have lost all of their hope of being happy and see only one way to feel better, making the other ones more miserable than them.

So, yesterday there was a huge march against far right, from place de la République to place de la Nation.

Right in the middle of it, close to place de la Bastille, there was a little Vietnamese vegan restaurant where I had lunch with three dear friends of mine.

After the dessert, we basically only had to get out of the restaurant to get part of the demonstration.

It was huge and very positive.

When we were approaching the end of it, we walked back to Bastille.

From there we could see that the boulevard Beaumarchais was still full of demonstrators until the departure of the walk.

In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.

That made my day.

I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, social rights… We sang slogans together among which, my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s good to mesure the number of people healthy in mind there are still in my country, like the number of hopes left for a more kindly world.

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Professeur_Chantecler

June 16, 2024

11

Thank you!

Yesterday I was in Paris.

I had planned this trip long ago with a few friends.

We just wanted to spend some time together.

At thate time, we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

I don’t feel like explaining all of ththe entire political situation.

All you need to know, you already know: is that the far right is getting stronger and stronger in France, like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know of any country where people are not going crazy like they are here, I'd be glad to know).

By early July, there will be a votae/an election that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.

A country turns fascist when most of its citizens have lost all of their hope of being happy and see that the only one way to feel better, making th is to make other ones more miserable than them.

So, yYesterday, there was a huge march against the far right, that took place from place de la République to place de la Nation.

Right in the middle of it, close to place de la Bastille, there was a little Vietnamese vegan restaurant where I had lunch with three dear friends of mine.

After (the) dessert, we basically only had to getstep out of the restaurant to getsee part of the demonstration.

It was huge and very positive.

When we were approaching the end of it, we walked back to Bastille.

From there we could see that the boulevard Beaumarchais was still full of demonstrators until the departureend of the walk.

In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from theinterrupted flow of marchers from start to the finish.

That made my day.

I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, and social rights. We sang slogans together among which,, including my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s a good way to measure the number of people who are still healthy in mind there are still in my country, like the number ofin my country, and how much hope is left for a more kindlyer world.

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It's awful here in Germany as well :(

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Professeur_Chantecler

June 16, 2024

11

Thanks a lot!

A country turns fascist when most of its citizens have lost all of their hope of being happy and see only one way to feel better, making the other ones more miserable than them.


A country turns fascist when most of its citizens have lost all of their hope of being happy and see that the only one way to feel better, making th is to make other ones more miserable than them.

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So, yesterday there was a huge march against far right, from place de la République to place de la Nation.


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So, yesterday there was a huge march against the far right, from place de la République to place de la Nation.

Right in the middle of it, close to place de la Bastille, there was a little Vietnamese vegan restaurant where I had lunch with three dear friends of mine.


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After the dessert, we basically only had to get out of the restaurant to get part of the demonstration.


After (the) dessert, we basically only had to getstep out of the restaurant to getsee part of the demonstration.

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After the dessert, we basically only had to get out of the restaurant to getbe part of the demonstration.

It was huge and very positive.


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When we were approaching the end of it, we walked back to Bastille.


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From there we could see that the boulevard Beaumarchais was still full of demonstrators until the departure of the walk.


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In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.


In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from theinterrupted flow of marchers from start to the finish.

In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.

In other words, there was an unbroken walker-flow from the start to the finish.

Not sure what walker flow is. Do you mean the flow of events was unbroken? Or a certain unbroken energy?

When the Walk Against Far Right Came to Me


When the Walk Against The Far Right Came to Me

Think you need a "the" because far right is like a noun group of people. It sound better to me also.

Yesterday I was in Paris.


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I had planned this long ago with a few friends.


I had planned this trip long ago with a few friends.

I had planned this longtrip a long time ago with a few friends.

I had planned this trip long ago with a few friends.

We just wanted to spend some time together.


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That made my day.


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At that time we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.


At thate time, we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

At thate time, we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

At that/ the time we didn’t know that it would be an important day for France.

Another way to say

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation.


I don’t feel like explaining all of ththe entire political situation.

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation. of France right now, though.

I don’t feel like explaining all of the political situation./ the whole political situation.

All you need to know, you already know: far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know).


All you need to know, you already know: is that the far right is getting stronger and stronger in France, like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know of any country where people are not going crazy like they are here, I'd be glad to know).

All you need to know, you is stuff you probably already know: the  far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know).

All you need to know, you already know: the far right is getting stronger and stronger in France like almost everywhere in the world (by the way, if you know any country where people are not going crazy like here, I’d be glad to know).

By early July, there will be a votation that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.


By early July, there will be a votae/an election that will make our government either mainly fascist, or a bit progressive.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, social rights… We sang slogans together among which, my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s good to mesure the number of people healthy in mind there are still in my country, like the number of hopes left for a more kindly world.


I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, and social rights. We sang slogans together among which,, including my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s a good way to measure the number of people who are still healthy in mind there are still in my country, like the number ofin my country, and how much hope is left for a more kindlyer world.

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I felt connected with so many human beings walking for justice, equality, social rights… We sang slogans together among which, my favourite, the famous Italian “Siamo tutti antifascisti!” It’s good to measure the number of people healthy in mind thereat are still in my country, like the number of hopes left for a more kindly world.

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