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doctrinaire

Sept. 12, 2024

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible. I aspire to overcome such deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.


睡眠は一般的に無害で健康増進につながる活動と考えられていますが、睡眠不足になる可能性はあります。そのような睡眠不足を克服したいと考えていますが、実現の見込みはなかなか難しいようです。

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible.

I aspire to overcome such deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.

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The importance of sleep can never be overstated. Before all else, make sure that you obtain a good night's rest every night.

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doctrinaire

Sept. 30, 2024

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible.

I aspire to overcome such deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.

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doctrinaire

Sept. 13, 2024

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When Sleeping Becomes an Unreachable Goal Problem

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible.is harmful

I think this is what you're trying to say

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You can try to stay away from the screen 30 minutes before you sleep.
Your English is really formal though, like you're writing an article, just my opinion🤔

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Sept. 13, 2024

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Sept. 13, 2024

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable GoalUnattainable

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possibleealthy activity, it's possible to become sleep-deprived.

I aspire to overcome suchleep deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.

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doctrinaire

Sept. 13, 2024

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Sept. 13, 2024

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal

Unreachable is a perfectly fine word choice.

Some alternative suggestions (a bit more native sounding) would be:
"When Sleep Becomes an Unobtainable Goal"
"When Sleep Becomes an Impossible Goal"

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remis certainsly possible.

"remains possible" suggests that something continues to be possible even though something happened.

You could use it like this:
"Despite advancements in sleep-related healthcare, sleep deprivation remains a possibility for millions of people"

I aspire to overcome such deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.

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doctrinaire

Sept. 13, 2024

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When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal


When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable Goal

Unreachable is a perfectly fine word choice. Some alternative suggestions (a bit more native sounding) would be: "When Sleep Becomes an Unobtainable Goal" "When Sleep Becomes an Impossible Goal"

When Sleep Becomes an Unreachable GoalUnattainable

When Sleeping Becomes an Unreachable Goal Problem

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Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible.


Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remis certainsly possible.

"remains possible" suggests that something continues to be possible even though something happened. You could use it like this: "Despite advancements in sleep-related healthcare, sleep deprivation remains a possibility for millions of people"

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possibleealthy activity, it's possible to become sleep-deprived.

Although sleep is typically regarded as a harmless and health-promoting activity, sleep deprivation remains possible.is harmful

I think this is what you're trying to say

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I aspire to overcome such deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.


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I aspire to overcome suchleep deprivation, though the prospect of doing so appears unattainable.

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