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alexwong2164

May 11, 2022

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When passion meet compare

When passion meet compare

I through I am a passion learner.

I use this website to improve my language for more than 10 years.

I also help others who wants to learn English.

As result I “one stone two birds”.

And that is the motivation to keep me going.

But today I make a new friend.

Her posting is much devoted and passion than me.

Compare to her contribution I feel shame that I claim myself is a passion learner.

I am sad and happy.

Sad because someone is actually better than me!

Happy because by watching her I know what I missing.

One more stop to become a perfect example.

Corrections

I through I am a passionate learner.

I also help others who wants to learn English.

As result I “one stonekill two birds”. with one stone."

And that is the motivation tohat keeps me going.

But today I makde a new friend.

Her posting is much devoted ands are more passionate than mine.

Compared to her contributions, I feel shame that I claim myself isto be a passionate learner.

Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing.

Feedback

Good job. But remember, you should feel proud of your progress no matter who seems to be better or worse than you. Keep up the good work :).

When passion meet compare


When passion meet compare


I through I am a passion learner.


I through I am a passionate learner.

I use this website to improve my language for more than 10 years.


I also help others who wants to learn English.


I also help others who wants to learn English.

As result I “one stone two birds”.


As result I “one stonekill two birds”. with one stone."

And that is the motivation to keep me going.


And that is the motivation tohat keeps me going.

But today I make a new friend.


But today I makde a new friend.

Her posting is much devoted and passion than me.


Her posting is much devoted ands are more passionate than mine.

Compare to her contribution I feel shame that I claim myself is a passion learner.


Compared to her contributions, I feel shame that I claim myself isto be a passionate learner.

I am sad and happy.


Sad because someone is actually better than me!


Happy because by watching her I know what I missing.


Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing.

One more stop to become a perfect example.


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