May 14, 2020
When I write.
When I write, I sketch some Ideas on some pieces of paper, but when I finish I realize that they weren't the real ideas that I thought of in the first place, It's changed to an extend that I forget what they were originally about.
It's known that most books weren't wrote on a day, a week but in years or even decades, but the question that beg it self, Is these books was upon the same idea before it they becomes books.
Is a book a quality that fold and twist the idea into his words and style? that changes the ideas into his favor and preference?
but despite these questions, Is this journal was about the same idea that now it's written?
When I write.
When I write, I sketchnote some Iideas on some pieces of paper, but when I finish, I realize that they weren't the real ideas that I thought of in the first place, It'sbut rather they are changed to an extend that I forget what they weret, because I had forgotten what my ideas originally aboutwere.
You use the word "sketch" with pictures, drawings, etc. With ideas/notes, you "note" them down, "write" them down, or "jot" them down
When you make one part of your sentence negative, for example when you used the word not, (they were not the ideas I thought of the same place), in order to make the next part of your sentence positive (they were changed), you use "but rather" (I hope that makes sense!!)
It's known that most books weren't wrote oitten in a day, nor in a week, but rather in years or even decades, but. However, the question that begs it self, Is is do these books was upon the same idea before it they becomes books.contain the author's original ideas?
I added "nor in a week" because you have to make the word "week" negative, since it's a part of a negative sentence (again with using the word "not" to make it negative), and I added the "but rather" once again for the same reason as last sentence
I cut the sentence into two to make it smoother, and reworded the second sentence
Is a book a qualitysomething that folds and twists the author's ideas into his words and style, and that changes the ideas into his favor and preference?
that changes the ideas into his favor and preference?
bBut despite these questions, Iis this journal waseven about the same idea that is now it's written?
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You did a great job! Most of the changes I did were just changes to make the sentences sound smoother :) Interesting topic to write about, too!
May 15, 2020
Thank you for your help!
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When I write, I sketch some Ideas on some pieces of paper, but when I finish I realize that they weren't the real ideas that I thought of in the first place, It's changed to an extend that I forget what they were originally about. When I write, I You use the word "sketch" with pictures, drawings, etc. With ideas/notes, you "note" them down, "write" them down, or "jot" them down When you make one part of your sentence negative, for example when you used the word not, (they were not the ideas I thought of the same place), in order to make the next part of your sentence positive (they were changed), you use "but rather" (I hope that makes sense!!) |
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It's known that most books weren't wrote on a day, a week but in years or even decades, but the question that beg it self, Is these books was upon the same idea before it they becomes books. It's known that most books weren't wr I added "nor in a week" because you have to make the word "week" negative, since it's a part of a negative sentence (again with using the word "not" to make it negative), and I added the "but rather" once again for the same reason as last sentence I cut the sentence into two to make it smoother, and reworded the second sentence |
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Is a book a quality that fold and twist the idea into his words and style? Is a book |
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that changes the ideas into his favor and preference?
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but despite these questions, Is this journal was about the same idea that now it's written?
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