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Oct. 18, 2022

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

I still remind when I was a young bird. Usually, I was always flying all the time. I didn't like to land.; on the ground I was exposed to a lot of dangers, in the air I was the king. I could keep fliying during hours without tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spots in the mountains or in the cities.

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

I still remindember when I was a young bird.

Usually, I was always flyingI flew all the time.

I didn't like sto landpping.

; oOn the ground I was exposed to a lotll kinds of dangers, in the air I was the king.

I could keep fliying duringfly for hours without tireding, and if I stopped in my flies,, I was always was inin the highest spots in thelike on mountains or ion the citieop of skyscrapers.

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Ducky

Oct. 20, 2022

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Thanks a lot!

When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

I still remindember when I was a young bird.

to remind: to make someone remember something (transitive verb)
to remember: you think about something that happened in the past (intransitive verb)

Usually, I was always flying allin the timeair.

I didn't like to land.

; oOn the ground, I was exposed to a lot of dangers,; in the air, I was the king.

I could keep fliying duringfor hours without getting tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spotsflying, I was always up high in the mountains or in the citiesy.

during: while something happens
for: how long something happens

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Ducky

Oct. 19, 2022

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)


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I still remind when I was a young bird.


I still remindember when I was a young bird.

to remind: to make someone remember something (transitive verb) to remember: you think about something that happened in the past (intransitive verb)

I still remindember when I was a young bird.

Usually, I was always flying all the time.


Usually, I was always flying allin the timeair.

Usually, I was always flyingI flew all the time.

I didn't like to land.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't like sto landpping.

; on the ground I was exposed to a lot of dangers, in the air I was the king.


; oOn the ground, I was exposed to a lot of dangers,; in the air, I was the king.

; oOn the ground I was exposed to a lotll kinds of dangers, in the air I was the king.

I could keep fliying during hours without tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spots in the mountains or in the cities.


I could keep fliying duringfor hours without getting tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spotsflying, I was always up high in the mountains or in the citiesy.

during: while something happens for: how long something happens

I could keep fliying duringfly for hours without tireding, and if I stopped in my flies,, I was always was inin the highest spots in thelike on mountains or ion the citieop of skyscrapers.

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