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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

I still remind when I was a young bird. Usually, I was always flying all the time. I didn't like to land.; on the ground I was exposed to a lot of dangers, in the air I was the king. I could keep fliying during hours without tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spots in the mountains or in the cities.

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

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Oct. 20, 2022

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)

I didn't like to land.

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Oct. 19, 2022

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When I Was a Bird (Fiction)


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I still remind when I was a young bird.


I still remindember when I was a young bird. I still remember when I was a young bird.

to remind: to make someone remember something (transitive verb) to remember: you think about something that happened in the past (intransitive verb)

I still remindember when I was a young bird. I still remember when I was a young bird.

Usually, I was always flying all the time.


Usually, I was always flying allin the timeair. Usually, I was always in the air.

Usually, I was always flyingI flew all the time. I flew all the time.

I didn't like to land.


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I didn't like sto landpping. I didn't like stopping.

; on the ground I was exposed to a lot of dangers, in the air I was the king.


; oOn the ground, I was exposed to a lot of dangers,; in the air, I was the king. On the ground, I was exposed to danger; in the air, I was the king.

; oOn the ground I was exposed to a lotll kinds of dangers, in the air I was the king. On the ground I was exposed to all kinds of danger, in the air I was the king.

I could keep fliying during hours without tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spots in the mountains or in the cities.


I could keep fliying duringfor hours without getting tired, and if I stopped in my flies, always was in hight spotsflying, I was always up high in the mountains or in the citiesy. I could keep flying for hours without getting tired, and if I stopped flying, I was always up high in the mountains or in the city.

during: while something happens for: how long something happens

I could keep fliying duringfly for hours without tireding, and if I stopped in my flies,, I was always was inin the highest spots in thelike on mountains or ion the citieop of skyscrapers. I could fly for hours without tiring, and if I stopped, I was always in the highest spots like on mountains or on top of skyscrapers.

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