April 16, 2021
This is a story when I went to a business trip to Warsaw in Poland three years ago.
When I got off work in a research center in Warsaw, I decided to visit the Chopin Museum.
This event was occurred after I bought Sandwiches at a convenience store near the museum.
I used my credit card to pay them and I put the card in my pocket.
After having the food, I went to the museum and tried to buy a ticket.
Right when seeking my card, I found out that it wasn't in my pocket or in my bag.
Much to my frustration, I couldn't find it finally.
Because the I should pay my hotel fee with the card, I was so nervous.
If I didn't pay my fee with the card, I wouldn't refund the spending from my company.
Fortunately, with the aid of my coworker in Warsaw, I could pay the fee.
After that, I always bring spear cards for avoiding this situation.
이것은 제가 3년전에 폴란드, 바르샤바로 출장을 갔을 때의 이야기 입니다.
바르샤바에 연구소에서 퇴근한 후에, 저는 쇼팽 박물관에 가기로 다짐했습니다.
이 이벤트는 제가 박물관 근처에 편의점에서 샌드위치를 산 후에 일어났습니다.
저는 제 신용카드를 이용해 그것들을 샀고, 그 카드를 제 주머니에 넣었습니다.
음식을 먹은 후에, 저는 박물관으로 향했고, 티켓을 사려고 했습니다.
제가 카드를 찾으려 했을 그때, 저는 카드가 제 주머니며, 가방에 없는 것을 알아차렸습니다.
매우 좌절스럽게도, 저는 결국 그것을 찾지 못했습니다.
저는 그 카드로 호텔 요금을 지불해야만 했기데, 저는 너무나 심각해졌습니다.
만약 그 카드로 요금을 지불하지 않는다면, 저는 회사로부터 그 지출을 환불받지 못합니다.
다행히, 저의 바르샤바 동료의 도움으로, 저는 그 요금을 지불하였습니다.
이후로, 저는 이 상황을 피하기 위해, 항상 여분의 카드를 가지고 다닙니다.
When I Lost My Credit Card Abroad
This is a story about when I went ton a business trip to Warsaw in Poland three years ago.
When I got off work in a research center in Warsaw, I decided to visit the Chopin Museum.
This event was occurred after I bought Ssandwiches at a convenience store near the museum.
I used my credit card to pay for them and I put the card in my pocket.
After having the food, I went to the museum and tried to buy a ticket.
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Because the I shouldI needed to pay my hotel fee with the card, I was so nervous.
If I didn't pay my fee with the card, I wouldn't refund the spending fromget reimbursed by my company.
Fortunately, with the aid of my coworker in Warsaw, I could pay the fee.
After that, I always bring speare cards for avoiding this situation.
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Right when seeking my card, I found out that it wasn't in my pocket or in my bag.
"Right" is unnecessary here and makes it feel a little unnatural |
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Because the I should pay my hotel fee with the card, I was so nervous. Because |
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If I didn't pay my fee with the card, I wouldn't refund the spending from my company. If I didn't pay my fee with the card, I wouldn't |
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