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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

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When I Lost My Credit Card

This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in Poland three years ago.

It was happening while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store buying sandwiches for my dinner.

That was the last moment I remembered my credit card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I lost the card.

I went out and followed back where I walked, but it was already disappearing.

Fortunately, I had extra money to come back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.

Now, I always take spare cards for avoiding this situation during trips.

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When I Lost My Credit Card

This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in, Poland three years ago.

Or: This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw, a city in Poland, three years ago.

It was happening while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store to buying sandwiches for my dinner.

That was the last moment I remembered having my credit card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I lost the card.

I went out and followtraced back where I walked, but it was already disappearinged.

"Traced back" and "Traced back my footsteps" are common phrases that are used in situations like this. :)

Fortunately, I had extra money to comeget back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.

Now, I always take spare cards forin order to avoiding this situation during trips.

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Great job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 4, 2022

402

Thank you very much! :)

When I Lost My Credit Card

This is a story aboutis from when I travelled to Warsaw in, Poland three years ago.

It was happeninged while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store to buying sandwiches for my dinner.

That was the last momenttime I remembered having my credit card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I had lost themy card.

I went out and followed backleft the museum and retraced my steps where I had walked, but it was already disappearinggone.

A lot of those corrections were just stylistic choices so your original sentence was not too far from being correct!

Fortunately, I had extra money to comego back to my hotel, but I was still very nervous at thate time.

Now, I always take spare cards forto avoiding this situation during trips.

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Nice writing but an unfortunate story!

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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

When I Lost My Credit Card

This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in Poland, three years ago.

It was happeninged while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store buyingand I bought sandwiches for my dinner.

That was the last moment I remembered my credit card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I had lost the card.

I went out and followed my path back to where I walked, but it was already disappearinggone.

You could also say, "I went out and traced my steps back to where I walked, but it had already disappeared."

Fortunately, I had extra money to comego back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.

Now, I always take spare cards forto avoiding this situation during trips.

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Oh wow that's an unlucky story! I gave someone my card recently and they lost it! What a headache 👍

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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

That was the last moment I remembered my credit card.


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That was the last momenttime I remembered having my credit card.

That was the last moment I remembered having my credit card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I lost the card.


When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I had lost the card.

When I tried to buy a ticket at the museum, I found out that I had lost themy card.

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When I Lost My Credit Card


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This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in Poland three years ago.


This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in Poland, three years ago.

This is a story aboutis from when I travelled to Warsaw in, Poland three years ago.

This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw in, Poland three years ago.

Or: This is a story about when I traveled to Warsaw, a city in Poland, three years ago.

It was happening while I was going to the Chopin Museum.


It was happeninged while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

It was happeninged while I was going to the Chopin Museum.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store buying sandwiches for my dinner.


Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store buyingand I bought sandwiches for my dinner.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store to buying sandwiches for my dinner.

Before entering the museum, I visited a convenience store to buying sandwiches for my dinner.

I went out and followed back where I walked, but it was already disappearing.


I went out and followed my path back to where I walked, but it was already disappearinggone.

You could also say, "I went out and traced my steps back to where I walked, but it had already disappeared."

I went out and followed backleft the museum and retraced my steps where I had walked, but it was already disappearinggone.

A lot of those corrections were just stylistic choices so your original sentence was not too far from being correct!

I went out and followtraced back where I walked, but it was already disappearinged.

"Traced back" and "Traced back my footsteps" are common phrases that are used in situations like this. :)

Fortunately, I had extra money to come back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.


Fortunately, I had extra money to comego back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.

Fortunately, I had extra money to comego back to my hotel, but I was still very nervous at thate time.

Fortunately, I had extra money to comeget back to my hotel, but I was very nervous at that time.

Now, I always take spare cards for avoiding this situation during trips.


Now, I always take spare cards forto avoiding this situation during trips.

Now, I always take spare cards forto avoiding this situation during trips.

Now, I always take spare cards forin order to avoiding this situation during trips.

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