Dec. 18, 2021
When Getting Broken Book
When I get a broken book which I bought online, I usually write an e-mail to the help desk.
If there isn't enough reply, I try to call the help desk and talk about how to resolve.
Most of the time, the help desk sends a new book and asks to return the broken book.
Some cases, I request to refund if the service isn't kind or not convenient.
After facing these issues several times, I was getting tired to do this work.
That's a one reason why I started to read e-books instead of paper books.
When Getting Broken Book
When I get a broken book which I bought online, I usually write an e-mail to the help desk.
If there isn't enough of a reply, I try to call the help desk and talk about how to resolve the issue.
Just saying "resolve" sounds a bit off here.
Most of the time, the help desk sends a new book and asks to return the broken book.
SIn some cases, I request toa refund if the service isn't kind orhelpful notr convenient.
"kind" doesn't sound that natural here. Could you tell me what you meant?
After facing these issues several times, I was getting tired to doof all this work.
"I was getting too tired to do this work" may also work here, for a slightly different sense.
That's a one of the reasons why I started to read e-books instead of paper books.
Just saying "a reason why" would also be okay.
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Very well-written and expressed! :)
Only some small expression mistakes, but one can see that you're quite a good writer.
Dec. 19, 2021
Thank you so much.
Dec. 19, 2021
When Getting Broken Book
Oops, I forgot to correct this, "When Getting Broken Books" (with plural "books") would be correct.
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When I get a brokendamaged book whichthat I bought online, I usually write an e-mail to the help desk.
If there isn't enoughy don't reply, I try to call the help desk and talk about how to resolve the issue.
Most of the time, the help desk sends me a new book and asks me to return the brokendamaged book.
Some castimes, I request toa refund if the service isn't kind or not poor or inconvenient.
After faexperiencing theseis issues several times, I was getting tired tof doing this work.
That's a one of the reasons why I started to read e-books instead of paper books.
Dec. 19, 2021
Thank you very much.
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When Getting Broken Book
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If there isn't enough reply, I try to call the help desk and talk about how to resolve. If there isn't enough of a reply, I try to call the help desk and talk about how to resolve the issue. Just saying "resolve" sounds a bit off here. If the |
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Most of the time, the help desk sends a new book and asks to return the broken book. Most of the time, the help desk sends me a new book and asks me to return the This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some cases, I request to refund if the service isn't kind or not convenient. Some
"kind" doesn't sound that natural here. Could you tell me what you meant? |
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After facing these issues several times, I was getting tired to do this work. After After facing these issues several times, I was getting tired "I was getting too tired to do this work" may also work here, for a slightly different sense. |
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That's a one reason why I started to read e-books instead of paper books. That's That's Just saying "a reason why" would also be okay. |
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