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TOMO_o

March 7, 2025

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When Do You Feel Stressed?

When I can't spend time on my own. Sometime, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do. But recently I am pressed for time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

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WI feel stressed when I can't spend time on my own.

Sometime, I would like to be alone and free to do anything wthat I want to do.

But recently I am pressed forshort on time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

Pressed for is fine for meaning, this is just more natural.

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

When I can't spend time on my own I feel stressed.

If this was intentionally a fragment, that's okay, but I wanted to offer this option as an alternative in case it was unintentional.

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.

"would" and "what" (though I think you meant "that") are both unncessary in this sentence.

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Good work!!

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

When I can't spend time on my own.

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.
"

"Sometime" refers to an unspecified point in time, whereas "sometimes" means occasionally or at times
"anything what" is wrong in this context. "Whatever" is the correct word here, as it means "anything that"

But recently, I amhave been pressed for time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

you're talking about present here

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I also need to have what I call "me time" occasionally. It's draining not to spend time alone and just do what you want.

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

When Do You Feel Stressed?

When I can't spend time on my own.

Sometime, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.

But recently I am pressed for time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

When Do You Feel Stressed?

When I can't spend time on my own, I feel stressed.

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.

But rRecently, I am pressed for time, so. As a result, weekends are the only time that I can relax.

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Hope you can relax more soon.

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

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marblemenow

March 8, 2025

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You're welcome.

When Do You Feel Stressed?

When I can't spend time on my own.

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything w(that) I want to do.

I put (that) in brackets because it would actually be better without the word.

But recently I am've been pressed for time, so weekends are the only time thatwhen I can relax.

After recently, you need to use the past tense.

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Well done! Luckily, it's Friday today, so your relaxing days are coming soon.

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TOMO_o

March 8, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

When Do You Feel Stressed?


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When I can't spend time on my own.


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When I can't spend time on my own, I feel stressed.

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When I can't spend time on my own.

When I can't spend time on my own I feel stressed.

If this was intentionally a fragment, that's okay, but I wanted to offer this option as an alternative in case it was unintentional.

WI feel stressed when I can't spend time on my own.

Sometime, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.


Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything w(that) I want to do.

I put (that) in brackets because it would actually be better without the word.

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.
"

"Sometime" refers to an unspecified point in time, whereas "sometimes" means occasionally or at times "anything what" is wrong in this context. "Whatever" is the correct word here, as it means "anything that"

Sometimes, I would like to be alone and free to do anything what I want to do.

"would" and "what" (though I think you meant "that") are both unncessary in this sentence.

Sometime, I would like to be alone and free to do anything wthat I want to do.

But recently I am pressed for time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.


But recently I am've been pressed for time, so weekends are the only time thatwhen I can relax.

After recently, you need to use the past tense.

But rRecently, I am pressed for time, so. As a result, weekends are the only time that I can relax.

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But recently, I amhave been pressed for time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

you're talking about present here

But recently I am pressed forshort on time, so weekends are the only time that I can relax.

Pressed for is fine for meaning, this is just more natural.

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