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pancelot

Sept. 2, 2021

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When did you visit a church for the last time?

The last time I visited a church was two years ago I think. I grewp up in a christian family and even my grandpa was a Minister, but I think I didn't inherit him faith. The church was always boring for me, when I was a boy I was compelled to assist to the church but now as an adult I can refuse the invitations. I think that in this point of my life God and me are in a very good relation, I don't bother him and he don't bother me.

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When did you visit a church for the last time?

When was the last time you visited a church. <- a little more natural.

The last time I visited a church was two years ago I think.

I grewp up in a cChristian family and even my grandpa was a Mminister, but I don't think I didn't inherited hims faith.

The church was always boring for me, when I was a boy I was compelled to assist to the church but now as an adult, I can refuse the invitations.

I think that inat this point ofin my life God and me are inI have a very good relation,ship. I don't bother him and he doesn't bother me.

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pancelot

Sept. 3, 2021

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Thanks for your corrections Janie! :D

When did you visit a church for the last time?


When did you visit a church for the last time?

When was the last time you visited a church. <- a little more natural.

The last time I visited a church was two years ago I think.


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I grewp up in a christian family and even my grandpa was a Minister, but I think I didn't inherit him faith.


I grewp up in a cChristian family and even my grandpa was a Mminister, but I don't think I didn't inherited hims faith.

The church was always boring for me, when I was a boy I was compelled to assist to the church but now as an adult I can refuse the invitations.


The church was always boring for me, when I was a boy I was compelled to assist to the church but now as an adult, I can refuse the invitations.

I think that in this point of my life God and me are in a very good relation, I don't bother him and he don't bother me.


I think that inat this point ofin my life God and me are inI have a very good relation,ship. I don't bother him and he doesn't bother me.

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