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rsef4198

March 4, 2025

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what's yours dream?

Hello everyone.
I'm served for 21 months in air force, Then i'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.
What's yours dreams? and why do you chose that dream?

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I'mve served for 21 months in air force, Then i'mI'm finally thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?

and why doat made you chose that dream?

what's yours dream?

I'mve served for 21 months in the air force, ThenSo now i'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?

and why do you choose that dream?

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some mistakes with using the wrong tense but not too bad

what's yours dream?

Hello everyone.

I'm have served for 21 months in air force, Tthen iI'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?

and why doid you choose that dream?

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This was really good! My dream is to be rich and famous. I also want to be a fashion designer, and create designer clothes.

wWhat's yours dream?

I'mve served for 21 months in air force, Then iin the Air Force for almost 2 years. Right now, I'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

We don't usually say 21 months, so I put "almost 2 years."

What's yours dreams?

I assume you're talking about one dream?
If you're talking about more than one dream, you'd say "What are your dreams?" or "What dreams do you have?"

and wWhy do you choshave that dream?

If you want to ask about more than one dream, you'd say "Why do you have those dreams?"

wWhat's yours dream?

I'm served for 21 months in athe Air fForce, Then i'. I’m thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?

If it is singular, then it is “What’s your dream?” If it is plural, then it is “What are your dreams?”

aAnd why doid you choose that dream?

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I like your journal prompt. My dream is to listen, speak, read, and write in Chinese! I chose this dream because I want to teach this language to my future children.

wWhat's yours dream?

Hello everyone.

I'm served for 21 months in aAir force, Then i I'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?

and why doid you choose that dream?

what's yours dream?


wWhat's yours dream?

wWhat's yours dream?

wWhat's yours dream?

what's yours dream?

what's yours dream?

Hello everyone.


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I'm served for 21 months in air force, Then i'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.


I'm served for 21 months in aAir force, Then i I'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

I'm served for 21 months in athe Air fForce, Then i'. I’m thinking about my future and dreams right now.

I'mve served for 21 months in air force, Then iin the Air Force for almost 2 years. Right now, I'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

We don't usually say 21 months, so I put "almost 2 years."

I'm have served for 21 months in air force, Tthen iI'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

I'mve served for 21 months in the air force, ThenSo now i'm thinking about my future and dreams right now.

I'mve served for 21 months in air force, Then i'mI'm finally thinking about my future and dreams right now.

What's yours dreams?


What's yours dreams?

What's yours dreams?

If it is singular, then it is “What’s your dream?” If it is plural, then it is “What are your dreams?”

What's yours dreams?

I assume you're talking about one dream? If you're talking about more than one dream, you'd say "What are your dreams?" or "What dreams do you have?"

What's yours dreams?

What's yours dreams?

What's yours dreams?

and why do you chose that dream?


and why doid you choose that dream?

aAnd why doid you choose that dream?

and wWhy do you choshave that dream?

If you want to ask about more than one dream, you'd say "Why do you have those dreams?"

and why doid you choose that dream?

and why do you choose that dream?

and why doat made you chose that dream?

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