Oct. 14, 2024
What's your preference for spicy or non-spicy food?
I returned from my friend's house and had a nap for a while, I was really a bit tired. We made two types of hot pot soup, spicy and tomato soup. People who attended this birthday party originated from Canada, Indonesia, and my daughter and I who are from China. The exciting thing is they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, that they even drank the soup out in the end, the boneless sliced fish made the soup more natural delicious. Surprisingly, my daughter and I ate most of the spicy dishes. After the meal, we discussed how local climate influences local residents' tastes. I said people from the mountainous and humid areas might accustomed to spicy food like me, while other people from coastal, tropical regions and prairie places might prefer sweet ones.
从朋友家回来，我小睡了一会，我的确有点疲倦。我们做了两种火锅汤料，辣的和番茄汤料。参加生日聚会的来自加拿大，印尼以及来自中国的我和我的女儿。令人兴奋的是他们非常喜欢番茄锅底，最后把汤都喝完了，去骨的鱼片让锅底更自然鲜美。意外的是，我和我女儿吃了大多数的香辣食品。餐后， 我们讨论了气候对人的影响。 我说来自山区和潮湿地区的人喜欢比较辣的食物， 然而沿海，热带和平原地区的人偏爱甜食。
What's your preference for, spicy or non-spicy food?
I returned from my friend's house and had a napped for a while, I was really a bit tired.
“Took a nap” also works, but not with “for a while”. Besides, use “Took a nap”, not “had a nap”. It works more often than the former (first)
We made two types of hot pot soup, spicy and tomato soup.
The exciting thing is that they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, that they even drank the soup outdry in the end, the boneless sliced fish made the soup more naturally delicious.
You could also say “they drank the whole soup” instead of “they even drank the soup dry”.
Surprisingly, my daughter and I ate most of the spicy dishes.
After the meal, we discussed how local climate change influences local residents' tastes.
I said people from the mountainous-like and humid areas might accustomed to spicy food like me, while other people from coastal-like, tropical regions and prairie places might prefer sweet ones.
Mountainous and Coastal are rather strange and rare words.
Oct. 15, 2024
I made a mistake, you had the second to last sentence right! Sorry.
Oct. 15, 2024
Thank you for your corrections. The structure of parallel "-like" works well.
What'sDo your preference for spicy or non-spicy food?
I don't think it's wrong but a bit unnatural and clunky.
I returned from my friend's house and had a nap for a while, I was really a bit tired.
"really" and "a bit" are opposites, meaning isn't clear.
We made two types of hot pot soup, spicy and tomato soup.
People who attended this birthday party originated from Canada, Indonesia, and my daughter and I who are from China.
The exciting thing is they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, that they even drank the soup out of the bowl in the end, the boneless sliced fish made the soup more natural delicious.
After the meal, we discussed how local climate influences local residents' tastes.
I said people from the mountainous and humid areas might be accustomed to spicy food like me, while other people from coastal, tropical regions and prairie places might prefer sweet ones.
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Amazing work!
Oct. 15, 2024
Thank you for the corrections!
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What's your preference for spicy or non-spicy food?
I don't think it's wrong but a bit unnatural and clunky. What's your preference |
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I returned from my friend's house and had a nap for a while, I was really a bit tired. I returned from my friend's house and had a nap for a while, I was really "really" and "a bit" are opposites, meaning isn't clear. I returned from my friend's house and “Took a nap” also works, but not with “for a while”. Besides, use “Took a nap”, not “had a nap”. It works more often than the former (first) |
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We made two types of hot pot soup, spicy and tomato soup. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People who attended this birthday party originated from Canada, Indonesia, and my daughter and I who are from China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The exciting thing is they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, that they even drank the soup out in the end, the boneless sliced fish made the soup more natural delicious. The exciting thing is they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, that they even drank the soup out of the bowl in the end, the boneless sliced fish made the soup more natural delicious. The exciting thing is that they enjoyed the tomato soup so much, You could also say “they drank the whole soup” instead of “they even drank the soup dry”. |
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Surprisingly, my daughter and I ate most of the spicy dishes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After the meal, we discussed how local climate influences local residents' tastes. After the meal, we discussed how local climate influences local residents' tastes. After the meal, we discussed how local climate change influences local residents' tastes. |
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I said people from the mountainous and humid areas might accustomed to spicy food like me, while other people from coastal, tropical regions and prairie places might prefer sweet ones. I said people from the mountainous and humid areas might be accustomed to spicy food like me, while other people from coastal, tropical regions and prairie places might prefer sweet ones. I said people from the mountain Mountainous and Coastal are rather strange and rare words. |
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